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Apr 24, 2013 1:06 PM #954596
So, I just want to ask you guys... What's wrong with this animation? I need to know lol...
And is this a right place to put it? Cause i need your help, guys X( I think that anim. was smooth enough and pretty logic lol..

thank you :)
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Apr 24, 2013 1:09 PM #954598
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Apr 24, 2013 1:14 PM #954602
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lol... at the end of the salto.. I stop to work on it.. Cause my clan mates said that, that's not good enough XD ;n; So I remake it into here: http://sta.sh/023wbnkpcxpa
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Apr 24, 2013 1:58 PM #954627
what fps you use in that anim?
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Apr 24, 2013 2:02 PM #954631
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what fps you use in that anim?


24 why?
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Apr 24, 2013 2:05 PM #954633
The First Kick was so fast try to anticipate it more while the frontflip kick was lack of easing at the last position thats what i can say :3
also its look like 30 fps for me XD
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Apr 24, 2013 2:16 PM #954641
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The First Kick was so fast try to anticipate it more while the frontflip kick was lack of easing at the last position thats what i can say :3
also its look like 30 fps for me XD


The fist kick is a logic think if that's a fast movement lol :p Try to do that, maybe yours is faster than my stick XD And... PLEASE READ THE DESCRIPTION!!! I haven't finish that animation yet. I stopped, because someone said that, that animation is bad XD So, I haven't finish with that easing part :p
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Apr 24, 2013 2:19 PM #954643
lol sorry i didnt saw that XD
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Apr 24, 2013 2:56 PM #954667
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Why the fuck is this thread here? General Help is for General. Help.


You can mad to me, sir :) But please DON'T SAY ANY BAD WORD!! Bad word is bad... lol that's why it called as 'BAD WORD' Don't you learn that thing? XD
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Apr 24, 2013 3:28 PM #954685
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Why the fuck is this thread here? General Help is for General. Help.
This is the place where the animations are posted and people can ask for CnC. This is certainly not a post for general help.

I've already commented on this haven't I TheX9? :P
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Apr 24, 2013 4:29 PM #954728
i know it now, mister strike :p anyway, you haven't give any cnc for this animation, you said "not bad" lol... by the way, don't forget to read the description.

Thank you :)
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Apr 24, 2013 9:51 PM #954868
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You can mad to me, sir :) But please DON'T SAY ANY BAD WORD!! Bad word is bad... lol that's why it called as 'BAD WORD' Don't you learn that thing? XD


Ah you can't really make people stop swearing on here :P

As for the anim I thought the gravity was a bit off, there wasn't a lot of easing into the kick, and the flow seemed kind of off, but it wasn't bad
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Apr 24, 2013 10:38 PM #954905
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You can mad to me, sir :) But please DON'T SAY ANY BAD WORD!! Bad word is bad... lol that's why it called as 'BAD WORD' Don't you learn that thing? XD

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Now that I've had my fun, the cnc I would give has already been briefed over, so I won't bother.
You have potential to be a pretty swell animator, so hit the drawing board again and again.