I made this to utilize my skills using a western semi-realistic style in my drawings as opposed to my overly done anime one). I basically decided to draw Cole Macgrath again because I love him and he serves as a decent model for the basic white male. Also if you have anything useful or important to say I'd suggest you pop in this place (I'm not going be checking here):

http://quikanims.deviantart.com/art/inFAMOUS-Unlikely-Hero-367545277?q=gallery%3Aquikanims&qo=0

But yeah enjoy.

i still say its a wanna be nico, gta4 lol

The line art really needs cleaning up and the eye positioning is off, he looks spaced out.
I don't really know which way his head is facing, directly forward or looking a little to the left?

Quik you're so rusty.
First of all, his shoulders are too small and sloping. His head for in general is too box-ish. The eyes are off position, and the shading is rough.
This might help
http://www.stanprokopenko.com/blog/2009/05/draw-head-any-angle/