My first ( please critique )

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Jun 5, 2008 10:52 PM #149480
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This is my first not sure if you'll be able to see it it's a running cycle if you can't see it please go to this link [SWF="http://img412DotimageshackDotus/img412/1228/runcyclekm9Dotswf"][/SWF] (remove the space in the link and add dots) :Happy: please please please critique lol

http://img412 imageshack us/img412/1228/runcyclekm9 swf
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Jun 5, 2008 10:54 PM #149482
http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/1228/runcyclekm9.swf
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Jun 5, 2008 10:56 PM #149487
thanks body_in_the_lake
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Jun 5, 2008 10:58 PM #149488
still doesn't work for me >,,< i think it's something with my internet. are you shure it's the right link? try uploading it on
www.antiup.com
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Jun 5, 2008 11:01 PM #149492
ok its very choppy,the stickfigure is way to stiff,and the arms should be moving not hanging back in mid air........but other wise not to bad for first ive seen worse and is that pivot??if it is its in the wrong section
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Jun 6, 2008 3:36 AM #149677
thanks for the critism aphotic i'll try to improve my skills according to your opinion
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Jun 6, 2008 5:30 PM #149973
Wow that looks exactly like one of my first run cycles, (if you search my name you'll find it), try upping the frame rate a little. Head over to the tutorials section of the site and you'll find some great running/walking tutorials.
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Jun 6, 2008 10:43 PM #150171
make sure your stickmans footing stays firm- like in one place - look for the onion skin button. It works like in pivot & easytoon, you can see the previous and frames ahead of you, an also theres an edit multiple frames button(Different story), back to subject. you have a help index we hope, so keyword "Onion Skin" in the help thingy,..... yeah....