I don't like this.
At all.
Except from the clouds, everything sucks.
Nrgh!

Amazing!! The clouds would have to be my favorite out of this, but the city itself is so well placed that it compliments the artwork fully. I would love to see more like this!

It's Very Great You should be Proud Of IT !

I am actually quite proud of my clouds.
But the city!
Argh, it's so synthetic, so out of style compared to the clouds.
No, I definitely don't like this pic.

The city is fairly good if you ask me, nothing really to be ashamed of
Though I guess you could straighten out the buildings a bit (especially that sign)

Those clouds thou ermahgerd

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I am actually quite proud of my clouds.
But the city!
Argh, it's so synthetic, so out of style compared to the clouds.
No, I definitely don't like this pic.

Then why are you wasting everyone's time by posting it here? Make something you're actually satisfied with and then share it, instead of acting like the quality of your own work is somehow beyond your control.

To show off. And maybe to get a few criticism on how to make my piece a little better.
Happy?

Yeah it looks great, the city ain't so bad. It is too small and not so detailed.

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To show off. And maybe to get a few criticism on how to make my piece a little better.
Happy?

Not really, that doesn't answer my question. Why would you want criticism on something that isn't a reflection of your abilities as an artist? You made a half-assed drawing, didn't like the result, and instead of identifying what you don't like about it and attempting to turn it into something you're proud of, you decided to "show it off" instead.

If you want to improve your art, the simple answer is put more effort into it. Put everything you've got into something and wait until it's as perfect as you can possibly make it, then show it off. That way the praise actually means something, and the criticism is actually relevant to your skills rather than your laziness. You're never going to improve by doing stuff like this.