Wanted to take a break from something else I was working on. lol.

http://kurimbbang.deviantart.com/art/kitty-368780181

I really have to say this.
It might only botehr me, but those lips ._.
You make it awesome, but for me those lips are really weird.

the ears also being the same color as human skin gives me butterflies bro
maybe a white or cream color would've suffised with a bit of fur enveloping the ears

Personally, the anatomy of the head is a lot better than some of the others one I have seen from you! Great job :) but the skinny arm does not fit AT ALL with the picture :-\
I love your style nonetheless :) What program do you use? Is it Flash??

thanks for the suggestions guys! i appreciate it!

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Personally, the anatomy of the head is a lot better than some of the others one I have seen from you! Great job :) but the skinny arm does not fit AT ALL with the picture :-\
I love your style nonetheless :) What program do you use? Is it Flash??

i mostly draw in paint tool sai and i'll occasionally use photoshop a little bit. ;3


oh and pumuecils, the cat ears are meant to be white and and then pink on the inner ear, I guess the difference in color isn't very much so it looks similar. I guess I could have maybe made the girl or the ears a tad darker or tinted it slightly

Looks great!

I can only spot small issues:
- the collarbones seem to be slightly off (too far to the left?)
- her face is probably too red. I mean, I get that shes meant to be blushing or whatever, but she looks like she's sunburnt and running a deadly fever. her face shouldn't be as red and shiny as her lips imo
- said blush is also unevenly positioned on her face (it's further from her nose on the left side of her face, compared to the right, perspective considered)
- her arm/wrist look disproportionately thin to me, compared to the size of her head, hand, and shoulders.

I dunno what JanRavnik is on about with the lips though, they look perfect to me, assuming you intended to do a cat-like upper lip. I really like the colouring of the lower lip especially.

keep up the good work

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Looks great!

I can only spot small issues:
- the collarbones seem to be slightly off (too far to the left?)
- her face is probably too red. I mean, I get that shes meant to be blushing or whatever, but she looks like she's sunburnt and running a deadly fever. her face shouldn't be as red and shiny as her lips imo
- said blush is also unevenly positioned on her face (it's further from her nose on the left side of her face, compared to the right, perspective considered)
- her arm/wrist look disproportionately thin to me, compared to the size of her head, hand, and shoulders.

I dunno what JanRavnik is on about with the lips though, they look perfect to me, assuming you intended to do a cat-like upper lip. I really like the colouring of the lower lip especially.

keep up the good work

Thanks so much for critique! It's really helpful to be specific and in-depth about the issues!!
And I dunno, know offense to JanRavnik, but the lips were the main thing I was hoping to get right actually. I had practiced doing lips for a bit and wanted to work it into a pic.Thanks!! My lip drawing/coloring practice has paid off! :D lol

You can make some great art man, nice. Scarecrow basically said everything I saw, except one thing, which would be the hand (specifically the fingers). They look a little too, i don't know, uniform i guess(?) and unnatural, if her hand was relaxed her pinky would curve in towards the palm the most, then the next finger would be a little bit more uncurled, so on, so forth (here's an example about what im talking about, sorry its so sketchy! (drew it in like 30 seconds 9_9) http://filz.us/BcN

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You can make some great art man, nice. Scarecrow basically said everything I saw, except one thing, which would be the hand (specifically the fingers). They look a little too, i don't know, uniform i guess(?) and unnatural, if her hand was relaxed her pinky would curve in towards the palm the most, then the next finger would be a little bit more uncurled, so on, so forth (here's an example about what im talking about, sorry its so sketchy! (drew it in like 30 seconds 9_9) http://filz.us/BcN

wow, I never thought of that! that actually really makess A LOT of sense. if she was relaxed, yeah her fingers would curl. thanks so much!