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Cooper Price || Bl.An.C. [Blast Android Class] -Retired for now-

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May 3, 2013 5:16 PM #963978
Name: Cooper Price
Alias: Bl.An.C. [Blast Android Class]
Age: 26/5 (Human Years/'Android' Years)
Gender: Male
Personality: A scientist at heart, he would observe most things before doing anything. In combat, Bl.An.C. would observe his enemy, think of strategies to take him/her down effectively then execute it. He is direct and to the point sometimes and speaks monotonously through the suit. Being inside the suit all these years has turned him cold and unfeeling, and the turn of events where his close friend betrayed him drew him closer to the void of heartlessness. Though he may act like that, he has a strong sense of camaraderie when he has begun to trust someone but his trust has become more of an impossibility to take. Allies will benefit from his protection [allies to him are determined as those who share a goal with him] and he admires gladiators that go out on a limb to protect those who can't fight or care about. No matter the enemy, he will never kill another. He may threaten to do so, but the best he will do is to permanently maim the enemy to take him off the gladiators list.

He speaks in a way that he states the nature of his statement before saying it.

Ex. "Query: What is the flavor of that ice cream?"
"Observation: Your ice cream is melting."

This speech pattern is only applicable when Bl.An.C. has his helmet on. When he does not, he would speak normally.

Abilities:
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Weapon Materialization: - Due to advancements in weapons teleportation, android suit is capable to receiving and sending back weapons from a fixed location, enabling versatility in the field of combat. Some weapons cannot be present in the same slot and therefore the present item must be sent back before claiming a new one.

List of Weapons (Click to Show)

Android Body : - The suit is durable, capable of protecting its pilot from hits that would usually break bone or rend flesh. Has life support, allowing the pilot to breathe underwater/outer space for a few minutes.
Optical Sensor : - The suit's one eye can see in infrared other than its usual vision. It can zoom in and out of a view.
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General Weaknesses:
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  • The suit is susceptible to an EMP blast, an attack of the sort would render the suit powerless if damaged severely already or its systems in disarray.
  • Large amounts of electricity, water, or radiation may affect it's delicate circuitry and disable his power and weapons for a moderate amount of time, leaving Bl.An.C. incredibly open for attack.
  • Technopathy has an effect on him.
  • Bl.An.C. favors the offensive over defensive, leaving his guard down in order to strike.
  • Switching in weapons have a lag in time before they fully come in play, a second or two is the time it takes for a weapon to fully materialize in or out. Switching between two weapons of the same slot will take one to two seconds.
  • You could stop the transport by blocking the energy strips along his body with solid matter.

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n eye where three grey streaks radiate from it that act as locks. His entire body is covered in a jet black suit with green stripes that line his arms and legs, a hollow oval on his back, a circle around his shoulder that extends downwards from the collarbone as two parallel lines that end before his pelvis. Each of these are energy strips and locks for the equipment to garner energy from and to lock onto on transport.

When the helmet would be retracted, it reveals Cooper's head, silver brown hair and grey green eyes. His pale skin that forgot the feeling of sunshine. Currently, the head is the only bodypart that can be seen without the suit, the rest is still melded to him.
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tanding there doing practically nothing except stare into the whiteness of the room.

A voice of a woman boomed inside: "Hey, it's time to test out your weapons!". It was Alice, Bl.An.C.'s colleague and lover. She was in the control room, looking at the Blast Android.

"Affirmation: Agreed." Bl.An.C. opened his palms and spread his arms wide. "Calling: Plasma Guns"

Alice pressed a few buttons."Bl.An.C., you do not need to say those words. your opponent will know your moves if you do so." Alice said, sliding to another console.

Back in the testing room, Bl.An.C.'s forearms were enveloped in a bright white light,in a few seconds, the light dissipated in a flash and a slim cylindrical weapon replaced the Blast Android's forearms. The weapon was sleek and had no visible rivets or nails. It was gray and had a semi sphere on its front end. It also had five small circular lights that indicate the power of the plasma used.

"Response: Just being dramatic, Alice" Bl.An.C. said raising his arms at targets that popped up from the walls. The plasma guns hummed to life, the five lights began to charge up power within seconds. Bl.An.C.'s targeting systems locked onto the targets. The pseudo-android fired a volley of plasma fire at the targets, disintegrating the very center of the red and white striped target.

"Shall we try a moving one this time?" Alice smiled. She tapped a few controls and pulled down a lever on her console.

Bl.An.C. returned the guns, immediately disappearing in a flash of light. In mere seconds, black armguards took its place. A hatch above him slid open and drones began to flood the test room. The spherical drones scanned their opponent, and revealing their laser guns hidden in small hatches at their sides. "Careful now, I don't like cleaning up melted bits of metal. Try to slice them cleanly and in two." Alice joked.

"Affirmation: If they'd stop exploding when I do, I'd gladly do so." The Blast Android's armguards quickly generated a powerful katar like blade.

"Combat sequence initiating." Alice said, counting down from five to one. Once she said the final number she pressed a blinking red button on her side which told the drones to commence attack.

Three drones swoop in, lasers trained onto their black suited target. Bl.An.C. ducked and rushed forward. Once the drones were past his head, he turned around and connected with a quick swipe of the beam blade, eliminating two of the ten drones. Bl.An.C. immediately raised his other arm, blocking laser fire
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May 3, 2013 7:34 PM #964060
Wait woah another RHW writer? I've never seen you before, but welcome to Stickpage! :3

Also, your other threads weren't showing up because the spam system here moderates posts with links of users that haven't had about 20 posts yet. Approved!
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May 3, 2013 8:16 PM #964074
Thanks, Luxoto. I was wondering why my other posts didn't show up.

For fear that the post will end up blank again, I will update here until my post count reaches 20 xD

:: Total Lag in time of switching between weapons of the same slot is one to two seconds, not four to five. Sorry about that, my mind wandered a bit there... ::
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May 3, 2013 10:50 PM #964173
Hey is your character a human in a suit or is he an android?

(Your character dare hope he doesn't meet up with Cyber virus http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?56915-quot-The-Ghost-quot)
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May 3, 2013 11:57 PM #964231
Quote from kingkickass2013
Hey is your character a human in a suit or is he an android?

(Your character would totally own Cyber virus http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?56915-quot-The-Ghost-quot)


"The suit absorbs most attacks, allowing the pilot to receive more damage and survive powerful attacks."
"Bl.An.C. was not an Android to begin with. He was once human and known as Cooper Price."

Should answer your questions.
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May 4, 2013 12:31 AM #964245
Quote from Luzoto
"The suit absorbs most attacks, allowing the pilot to receive more damage and survive powerful attacks."
"Bl.An.C. was not an Android to begin with. He was once human and known as Cooper Price."

Should answer your questions.


I think that confused me...
Allowing the pilot
And he was once human

^I don't know if school is getting to me, but I'm rather confused here too...
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May 4, 2013 12:39 AM #964248
SEE SEE I AM NOT ALONE, Who knows he could be a human cyborg, he could be a man in a suit (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2owt3depq2o your theme song), perhaps a man transformed into a bot with no traces of humanity left. HE COULD BE MULTIPLE THINGS!
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May 4, 2013 12:45 AM #964253
Basically, Cooper the scientist developed the robotic suit that a "pilot" can wear and fight in it, but while he was attacking the military facility after finding out the government's scheme, the radiation caused his "suit" to be merged on to him permanantly. This had a drastic effect on his personality and became an android.. So he was once a "human", but became an "android".

P.S. Think of Tony in his Iron Man suit but then he is stuck in it permanently, if that helps. I am guessing that is where ErrorBlender was getting at.

Anyways, I really love this character; the concept, the details, the writing style...
Quite excited to find out what would come out of his fight with Rhami and Astor duo :3
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May 4, 2013 12:45 AM #964254
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When the final schematics were done, they were immediately sent to the military for review. It was almost immediately approved, with one condition attached. They wanted pilot to be fitted into the android body. It was later revealed that the military was never after the androids' participation in the war, they wanted suits. They wanted them to change it and modify it to become a suit. Enraged by this, Cooper completed the project, but using himself as the controls. He went into the suit but never came back human. He used the suit to demonstrate the danger in using this tech with a human inside.

He fired on a nearby military compound, bathing it in an insane amount of radiation. He sent a message that human error will always occur, and that machines will be the most viable resource in a war. But as he landed, the suit could never be removed as it melded with him due to the intensity of the radiation. The circuitry had also melded partially with his brain. His memories were still intact but most, if not all, of his personality was eliminated. He had changed.


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Yea, learn to read KKA


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May 4, 2013 12:49 AM #964258
Well I've made myself look like an idiot TWICE here on this page so I will be leaving it.
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May 5, 2013 7:21 AM #965372
@Pluto_kun: Thanks for the comments. ^^
@kingkickass2013: I'd really love to have Bl.An.C. do combat with the Cyber Virus. A challenge is always what I need to improve.
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May 5, 2013 10:39 AM #965493
Before you know it, your character is going to go from saying "Start up project: kill ghost" all the way to "01001001 0100000 01100001 01101101 0100000 01100100 01100101 01100001 01100100 0100000 01101110 01101111 01110111" http://www.binarytranslator.com/index.php use this to translate.
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May 5, 2013 6:25 PM #965878
Quote from kingkickass2013
"01001001 0100000 01100001 01101101 0100000 01100100 01100101 01100001 01100100 0100000 01101110 01101111 01110111" http://www.binarytranslator.com/index.php use this to translate.


"I am dead now".
What can I say...
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May 6, 2013 12:56 PM #966619
Stop spamming king.

Anyway, this is my critic.
First of all, your style of writing are easy to understand, but suddenly, a large chunk of words are put in. Shock Therapy indeed.
Second, your notice of grammar errors are nice(Almost no error), and people won't take advantage on it.
Third, you vocab levels are on par with high-levels of the wRHGs, and I think that you deserves it.
Last one, is your plot. Your plot itself is simple, too simple, but you covered it up with a lot of descriptions. If you have a better plot, surely you'll win every battle.

Anyway, enjoy fighting in this wRHG section.
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May 6, 2013 1:38 PM #966658
@SJCRPV: Thanks! It was unintentional, I'll edit it out once I get the 20 post count xD.
@kingkickass2013: Our fight, if it would continue, would go after my bout with acutelatios. I love battles to have Bl.An.C. go against someone that will make him the apparent underdog.
@Triss: Shock therapy? You mean large bundles of text? Anyways, I appreciate the critic. Thank you. :)
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