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Divorced Man's Random Poem.(I'm not that man)

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May 10, 2013 1:53 PM #970118
Maybe she's a God.
Maybe she's a hoe.
But what do I know?
For a hoe is a real foe.

Might be my feelings.
Fined with the ringings.
Breaking the windows.
Crushing time on me.

Women is a woe.
So much her crow.
But dazzling hair upon the air.
Yet banging me onto my heart.

As the sun and moon meet.
And the sky with sea come.
I remember unto the vow.
Me and you live for ever.

Now upon the ceilings.
Pain with regret into me.
Crushed with a hint of soda.
Broken as a rusted tin can.

Maybe it's for the best we leave.
But thinking, can't we all just give?
For my love and for my soul.
You throw it all on the court.
Throw away all the money.
Throw away all the love days.

Now I stand alone.
And you stand alone.
Watching the skies together.
Memorize our glory days.

If we are not broken.
If we are together.

Everything would be better......
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May 10, 2013 1:59 PM #970127
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Yeah I'm pretty sure that's not a sonnet

Then Poem it is.
Cause I really can't tell the difference between Poem and Sonnet.
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May 10, 2013 2:20 PM #970169
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Seriously? I dont wanna have to say google is your friend, but GOOGLE IS YOUR FRIEND.

Btw the poem is terrible. I mean, rhyme and rhythm-wise. Grammatical errors. (Women is a woe.) Rhyming just dies midway. It honestly sounds more like a crazy person is saying it than a divorcee

Divorce make people crazy, so he's a mad person right now.(bad joke)
But thanks for the CnC.
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