1/2 and hour translated to a not-quite-yet-finished product
http://www.flickr.com/photos/94668591@N04/8726318114/in/photostream

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1/2 and hour translated to a not-quite-yet-finished product
which shall be edited later

You shouldn't make a thread here untill you actually have something to show.

silence your face i already had it. just couldnt find the folder of which it was withheld

You got a good feel for shading and outlines, but you're figures, specifically for the second one, are pretty off. Unless you already do, I'd suggest starting to use mannequins for your figures before you start your final sketch. This helps define your image and the correct proportions for the figure.

what do you mean by second one?