http://www.fileize.com/view/534d7fa3-e08/

so, yeah this is my first short-anim. its kinda rough, and i did not use v-cam.

any suggestions? i will accept some, and also any negative comments.

I think it's really good for a first.

It is good for a first.
His kicks look like an Irish dance.
And his back should move too.

wow. thanks good sirs/ladies!

On the kick don't keep his body so close and compact let it relax and stretch out and nice easing on the landings but when he lands lean him forward a little instead of having his back stiff and straight up he needs an ark to make it seem like the impact is pushing him downward a little other than those few things this is pretty good for a first try :> keep it up and if you keep working hard and stay dedicated i am sure you will be a great animator one day

thank you good sir!

should... should i separate his legs from his torso for a little bit when he's kicking?