RHG: SAND http://www.flickr.com/photos/94668591@N04/8735555168/
Fullbody: http://www.flickr.com/photos/94668591@N04/8734439719/
critique before i animate is what i require

How about you draw it with flash or whatever you will be animating it with. It looks like you have a neat concept.

i will but do you mind helping me with the transition into color or give me something that could help me transition from my usual pencil and paper onto maybe illustrator and or photoshop and also pm me a background i should use and i could prolly get the rest done