Not bad overall, but there were a couple errors u should look over next time you animate.
1. Your Flow
2. The sound quality (Go to publish and change the sound settings to best, uncheck convert to steoreo to mono, and 128 kb)
3. Your vcam could use more movement and a couple of shakes wouldn't hurt
4. Your reactions, easing, and movement seems unrealistic
5. Those 2 walk scenes in the beginning was extremely choppy
Well this is all i can point out from what i saw, but yeah its not bad but it's also not great v: