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May 18, 2013 12:08 AM #976648
So I did this today. And I wanted to know how you guys feel about it. CnC
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May 18, 2013 2:16 AM #976729
not bad but the shadings are wrong some spots,his hair's white spot are too blurry,try to un-blur it a bit :3
also you has a same thread title with woffer lol
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May 18, 2013 3:52 AM #976797
Thanks but I dont know how to change it.lol
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May 18, 2013 4:05 AM #976805
This is kinda bad for me to comment:

1. Shoulder on the right is too long and big
2. Neck is too long
3. Areed on J.Christian's comment on shadings
4. You tried to give his eye glow but it failed
5. What's that thing on the top left of his hair? (._.)
6. This drawing makes my brain unbalanced (>.>)

On the glowing eye... make it look like a shining red star (not the 5 sharp points) with 4 sharp points to make it sensitive...
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May 18, 2013 7:31 AM #976919
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May 18, 2013 7:36 AM #976925
Quote from Telepurte
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Pen Tablet!!

I'm Admiring you @Telepurte...
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May 18, 2013 7:39 AM #976928
Quote from harvie89

2. Neck is too long


Neck are not long it just need tapers to make it awesome like telepurte.
@Telepurte lol i like the chins reaction :3
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May 18, 2013 7:59 PM #977503
Thanks for the critiques.:D