stick fight practice

Started by: Hairysun | Replies: 3 | Views: 400

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May 19, 2013 8:16 PM #978631
Just for shits... C&C is always nice
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May 19, 2013 8:18 PM #978635
I love this tablet style, doesn't look like all the body parts are the same brush size :D
Very smooth and nice ! You should try to finish this !
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May 19, 2013 11:22 PM #978818
Wow Flux, that looks really good! Still love that unique style of yours, man!

If anything, the only CnC I can really give to you that has nothing to do with the setup of your style is the fact that the animation was a bit choppy as a whole. Maybe you can take some of those frames away to make the animation look a lot faster. Also, after the black stick had finished his last kick and touched the ground, he sort of wobbled a little. This wasn't really as much of a problem, though. It's not too noticeable.

Can't wait to see some more stuff from you Flux.
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May 20, 2013 11:24 AM #979403
nice one... fully anticipated movements of both the attacker and the defender. 5/5