Clan War battle
My opponent is not yet done
I asked a mod if I could post it here even though he's not yet done, it was ok.
So.. Yeah.. I just wanna show it to you guys :DDDD
Here's my clan war battle vs Ahdomatic's SabR (Ahdomatic won't be going here and he can't.. So... Free! :D)
Note: MY OPPONENT DID NOT FORFEIT, I just wanna show it to the public here!

that was pretty good nice job, you just need to work on your angles.

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that was pretty good nice job, you just need to work on your angles.

Hmm lol thanks, in the angles part, which scene? Most of the angles there I put effort but not on some because I still suck at it XD

WOw nice job man, that obviously must've taken you a while to finish :O

The backgrounds kind of... weren't good...? I mean, you need to study perspective and angles.
I personally think Back grounds look nice with no outlines. Like doing everything with pen and line tools then filling and deleting lines. But that's just style.
I also urge that you view some theory on colour and lighting..

The animation was quite qood though. However I do believe you need to size down on lines, both back ground aand animation.

Yea, overall I actually found the animation quite enjoyable. The backgrounds/perspective was off, and like telepurte siad it's a easy fix with time and practice. Google is your best friend in the world. The movements need work and the effects, but I'm sure that'll all be fixed with..practice! Great story though, needs work but it's finished and entertaining.

lolol sorry guys just got back
@Irian, yes, it took hell out of my life
@Telepurte, Yeah, I knew I shouldn't have chosen this style....
@Ezy, I don't practice (And I should really practice by now. *facedesks*) lol.. But thanks much for the advice!

F**king amazing

mofotastic, yey ....

Again Great Job man btw did you already ask your opponent if his done? :3

one word..........
Mofo...........

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Again Great Job man btw did you already ask your opponent if his done? :3

He's not yet done .3., I always finish first before opponent as usual (lol yeah, rush)
@Jobet... Oh you
@J.Christian, it's our signature word, dun copeh it D:<

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He's not yet done .3., I always finish first before opponent as usual (lol yeah, rush)
@Jobet... Oh you
@J.Christian, it's our signature word, dun copeh it D:<

lol u forget,im J.Bisk >.> also your determination and imagination are F***ing epic men :D

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lol u forget,im J.Bisk >.> also your determination and imagination are F***ing epic men :D

Like I said J.Christian (lolol) Dun go to the world out there with the power of mofos in your soul

first when he talk he wearing some thing and when he fight he take all the stuff in his body, a very dirty RHG