this is an anim i recently made


i would like advice and a rank

grrg, the arms, they are way to stiff, you should move them in the jump, the jump hasnt much power, the guy was holding the gun teribly

Your arms don't move enough, they seem kind of locked in place, unrealistic.

Found a great tutorial for ya, try some stuff off of this.
http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?t=14377

very stiff, move eve joint in every frame, and not much easing...work on it.

thanks ghostface. Il try it out

I checked it out ghostface. It really helps. Nice to get advice from one of the best
Jeez sorry guys, double post was a mistake

just edit next time XD for rank i would say low beg, but dont worry bout ranks just concentrate on makin anims and take ur time on ur anims
if u wanna talk online my msn is jon_edwards@hotmail.com

Thanks edward0, I used to be somewhere near mactwoks leauge. After I stopped animating, My old knowledge left me