This is my fan-art of left 4 dead.

CC?


Drawn with mouse

The Outline is too large .-.

Chibi. Very Chibi..

D'aw, it's cute Pox.

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Lines- A variation in the size of the lines could help me better tell what was what. The thick line makes it look wierd and should probably only be used if you want to outline things.

The hood- It doesn't look much like a hood at all, a hood tutorial could help with that.

Untidy- It isn't very neat, what I mean is; the lines are wobbly and aren't refined. Did you do this in MS paint?

Shoulders- The right shoulder is way more slanted than the other.

Blood- the blood hardly looks like blood, those red lines just look like red lines to me.[/spoiler]

I fear yet repect it

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D'aw, it's cute Pox.

[spoiler=]
Lines- A variation in the size of the lines could help me better tell what was what. The thick line makes it look wierd and should probably only be used if you want to outline things.

The hood- It doesn't look much like a hood at all, a hood tutorial could help with that.

Untidy- It isn't very neat, what I mean is; the lines are wobbly and aren't refined. Did you do this in MS paint?

Shoulders- The right shoulder is way more slanted than the other.

Blood- the blood hardly looks like blood, those red lines just look like red lines to me.[/spoiler]

Thanks I'll try and remember those tips. It was also Flash 8, I used a mouse to draw and if I were to use smaller brush it would be even more wobbly. I guess I'm comfortable with thick brush. Also it was technically my first non-Stick art. But thanks for the CC.

No problem, and I know what you mean. Whenever I try to do mouse art I usually go for thick lines because it's less wobbly, going back and forth with smaller sizes usually helps me even it out a bit. It is time consuming though.

I look forward to seeing you improve.