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"Zero" The First Element (Always watching...waiting for a challenger).

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Jun 3, 2013 7:24 AM #994501
[CENTER]Name:
Ensiron Ethereal (A.K.A Zero)

Abilities:
-Peak of human condition
-Knows basic counter/parry CQC
-Adept swordsman
(Due to countless battles he's participated in over the course of human history against man and myth alike.)
(Soon to be added: Magical sense )
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embodiment of his power, (yup that's real original), and has multiple gems in its hilt; each of which represent a different element.[/spoiler]
-Able to moderately manipulate each of the elements
(Fire, Water, Wind, Lightning, Earth/Rock, Nature, Ice)
-Able to tap into one of the elements and use it to a much larger extent
Ex. He can go fire form and instead of only being limited to some fireballs and short range flame throwers he can summon fire spires and increase the temperature of the area around him.
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nding gem on his sword's hilt glows . His hair becomes tinted in a similar color and his sword transforms to match the element. (All the following parenthetical comments are jokes....except this one...yeah.)

-Fire Form: His body emits searing waves of heat and his sword becomes a roaring sword shaped flame. The temperature at its base is approximately 1000 degrees. (God damn!!)

-Water Form: His sword becomes an amorphous blob of water. He can shape the sword into anything he wishes and circulate the current to speeds swift enough to repel many attacks. A thin layer of water also covers his body and repels weaker attacks. He prefers being a gunslinger in this form.
(Splash is still ineffective.)

-Earth Form: His sword becomes able to shape into any blunt object he chooses. He also has hardened skin and earth spires of varying sizes that orbit around him. (Get it? He's in Earth form...so he gets a gravitational pull...like the Earth...)

-Wind Form: His sword breaks apart and acts as a snake sword that can extend as far as he wishes and break apart. Gale force winds constantly blow outward in all directions from his body. (This form doesn't suck)

-Nature Form: Can spawn a grove of trees and brush in the area upon activation and he can camouflage his body. His sword becomes a thorny whip of death! (He can also speak Hippie)

-Ice Form: The battlefield reaches near freezing temperatures and ice spires are erected around the battlefield. His sword becomes an ice blade sharper than steel and he gets a spiked ice armor to cover his body. (Suck it Iceman!....I know you wanna. ;D)

-Lightning Form: His body becomes supercharged and he moves at shockingly fast speeds. His sword becomes thicker and ends in a cresent shape. He can split his sword apart down the middle and dual wield his hook ended blades. (The "shockingly fast speeds" part is a joke in it's own right, so to make another would not be looked on positively.)
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vy Blue

Wind Form=Light Green

Lightning Form=Yellow

Earth Form=Light Brown

Nature Form=Forest Green

Ice Form=Light Blue[/spoiler]
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Weaknesses:
-He can only sustain an elemental form for a couple of minutes when not fighting.
(So it's even less while he's in combat due to massive energy output.)
-While he can be an analytic combatant he is very rash in combat and does not always think his plans through.
-While in an elemental form he is highly susceptible to damage from attacks of the opposing element
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htning
Lightning -> Earth
Earth -> Nature
Nature -> Ice
Ice -> Fire[/spoiler]
-He can be stricken down almost as easily as any human.
(His body is able to take more of a beating than a human but it can't survive a gunshot to the head. He will be revived eventually, either in that same body or a new one depending on how damaged he was, due to his essence being the elements that run this planet.)
-Fatigued faster when spamming elemental abilities since his body not used to the power that dwells inside of him.
-Gullible and often times Naive when he's not being 100% serious which is usually never.

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Personality:
He enjoys a good laugh whether the situation calls for it or not. He tries to befriend most living things which could be taken as a sort of naivety due to his outgoing and friendly nature. When the time comes that he has no choice but to kill his enemies he does so reluctantly, and pleas for another path before he settles on there being no other option. HE LOVES PANCAKES! He is very impulsive which lands him in difficult situations quite often. He goes out of his way to ensure that those he cares about die in a manner they desire; whether it's on the battlefield or in old age.

Appearance:
-5'12'' :rolleyes:
-About the age of 24
-Lightly tanned tone to his skin
-Silver straight hair that he likes to keep around shoulder length
-Wears a black leather jacket with a white T-shirt underneath
-Wears dark blue or black jeans and mostly high-top shoes
-Silvery eyes that appear to be constantly flowing with energy
-Wears a silver chain necklace with a metallic emblem. On the emblem is a sword with Ensiron etched along the blade and wings in the background.

Demo 1: Personality (Click to Show)
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Demo 2: Combat (Click to Show)


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Lady Akiko:
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emotional bond with. She was a well respected, widowed, noble woman who presided over a fishing/farming village on the outskirts of Edo. She rescued and revived Ensiron when he washed up on their shores and allowed him to stay in her household. Seeing the kindness in him reminded her of her late beloved, this (along with his amazing sense of humor) is what sparked her affections for him. Ensiron later discovered that she was part of an assassin's guild which is how her husband m
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Jun 3, 2013 11:17 AM #994660
We‘ve been getting a lot of new guys lately O_o anyways, welcome to the frey that is the wRHG.
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Jun 3, 2013 11:47 AM #994697
"I hate phones. I miss messenger pigeons." <-- Made me laugh for a while XD

I like this character. I can't find too much to fuss about so I'll let you be on your way.
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Jun 3, 2013 2:43 PM #994882
For a second there I had thought we would gain another ninja/assassin in the wRHG. Just reading 'Zero' makes me think of it but that may just be me. And to counter myself, I remembered Zero from Code Geass.

Back to the wRHG itself, he seems okay to me. Nothing really overpowers him since his weaknesses tone down his time using his forms. I have a question though. Is his sword affected by his transformations? Would it burst into fire when he is in flame form? Yes, I am concentrating on his forms because I think it is awesome.

Other than that, I suppose you could clean up the demos and story a bit. I don't see much error in grammar or anything, its just that the sentence abruptly ends and is continued to the next line.

Zero victoriously sat back in his chair. The diner patrons in his immediate area sat slack-jawed staring at him. The plate on the table was larger than[this space]
his head and used to hold pancakes to match the size. He had bulldozed his way through twelve of IHOP's Godzilla Pancakes, beating the previous record by three. One waitress picked up the syrup flooded plate and the other pulled out a camera asking him to smile.


There are also some in the About/Story.

I like how his origin story goes. So he is the ever present being from Earth's beginning right? He knows of all the human's error and triumphs?
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Jun 3, 2013 3:06 PM #994904
Sweet! I'm glad I was able to make him acceptable because he could have easily been far too overpowered for his own good. Also I was trying to fix the indents in the paragraphs for about 30 minutes before I flipped over my table and kicked my chinchilla into orbit! Thanks for the welcoming Zaybull! :D

@Chamel: I'm glad someone else found that just as hilarious as I did when I proof read it.

Dear Errorblender,

YES! YES! Freaking YES his sword transforms along with him! What you described would be spot on for his fire form. For wind he'd probably get something like a snake sword. For earth he gets either a club or a giant buster sword sized mass of rock (I haven't really decided on which I just used one for the Demo 2). For water form he'd get an amorphous blob he can control that is shaped like his sword. To answer your final question, yes he has been around for almost all of human existance. Life made humans in his image and Chaos morphed their genetics in a way that caused them to decay over time.
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Jun 3, 2013 7:27 PM #995120
So basically, he was the model for human life, the very first 'human' in a way. Interesting. Add the sword transformations when you can to the first post when you've decided their forms, so it will orderly.
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Jun 3, 2013 8:36 PM #995185
Yeah that's right. His name is a derivative of a word meaning "First Son." I've added the forms in a spoiler under abilities. They are my initial ideas although I wouldn't reject a really awesome idea or alteration I may not have thought of.
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Jun 3, 2013 9:44 PM #995241
There could a last resort move. Like a "Finisher" sword form, where it uses holy light to enlarge, and strengthen the blade to an unnatural strength. It could also give the holder a great increase in speed, dexterity, etc.
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Jun 4, 2013 5:00 AM #995620
So a sort of berserker mode that activates when he is near death? I had thought of something like that but i felt it would be too much of a cliche. Also if he had that couldn't he also acquire some after death chaos form where he roams as an undead? He would essentially need to be vanquished three times before he is finally defeated. I thought that might be too over powered since a character like him is tough to balance.
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Jun 7, 2013 9:21 PM #1000046
I've added two more forms. Nature counteracts earth, ice counteracts nature, and fire counteracts ice.
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Jun 16, 2013 4:35 PM #1009233
Now that I've finished with my battle with Chance, Pencillum would like a battle. If you're not afraid of course. :)

Oh no, I'm slipping into arrogance again. Let me try again.

I officially challenge you to a wRHG battle.
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Jun 16, 2013 4:43 PM #1009239
Lol! That's funny. I don't have a witticism prepared for this so...sure!

*Ahem*

Zero and I officially accept your wRHG challenge!
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Jun 16, 2013 6:23 PM #1009333
I bid my first clan member good luck. :D
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Jun 16, 2013 6:34 PM #1009341
Thank you Clan Master! The fight will not be up for some time so I plan to train till the time comes that I must write!
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Jun 17, 2013 5:17 PM #1010345
Wait, just a question. When he's in wind form, gale force winds blow outward from ALL directions of his body. Is that strong enough to make him float in the air?
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