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Walk test number 2 and a bit of running

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fatboi88
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Jun 17, 2008 5:16 AM #158732
Please critique on my work so i can learn from my mistakes
by the way this is only legs
http://img152.imageshack.us/my.php?image=legssy8.swf
Please please please critique
yea i know about the size getting smaller and smaller :Smile:
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Jun 17, 2008 7:45 PM #159064
1. Add a floor
2. Make sure the legs don't shrink into Oompa Loompa Legs.
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Jun 17, 2008 7:53 PM #159069
the walk itself was pretty good just work on not resizing, also adding a floor would make it look better like the person above me said
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Jun 17, 2008 8:00 PM #159075
Next time, do the whole body. Making legs walk isn't going to help much if you're planning to do an animation involving anything with the upper half of the body.

Make the walk less deliberate and more fluid. Fast in the middle of the stride, and slower when the feet are on the ground.
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Jun 17, 2008 9:07 PM #159113
the knees are really low - lower legs are longer than thighs, think about re proportionining
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