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Unfinished Stick Fight [Raffeh]

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Jun 21, 2008 2:59 PM #161770
http://www.antiup.net/view/4901/
Update 2: http://www.antiup.net/view/4913/
Update 3: http://www.antiup.net/view/4982/
Finished: http://www.stickpageportal.com/watchmovie/blackvblue.html
It's probably my best, even though it's unfinished. C&C please.
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Jun 21, 2008 3:24 PM #161779
Pretty nice! I see improvement, alot!
Looks a bit like cicada, no flaws.
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Jun 21, 2008 3:27 PM #161782
nice dude I like the health percentage
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Jun 21, 2008 3:37 PM #161786
nice wrk mn it was all fine but i think personaly tht some of the movments wer a bit fast other thn tht it was awsome ( im no ver gd at criticizeing lol) (or spelling lol) keep up the gd wrk
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Jun 21, 2008 3:40 PM #161788
The health percentage won me over. Good work.
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Jun 21, 2008 3:42 PM #161789
Thanks, guys. In my opinion, it goes fast. Do you agree?
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Jun 21, 2008 3:52 PM #161799
No I don't.
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Jun 21, 2008 4:26 PM #161808
It resizes.
And yes, it does go a bit fast.
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Jun 21, 2008 4:36 PM #161813
Update:

http://www.antiup.net/view/4913/


I lowered the fps to 18.
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Jun 21, 2008 4:59 PM #161827
unlike lixu said there are clearly some flaws. not very big ones, but he resizes REALLY bad, also its way to fast, to see what's going on. but it was nice. =3
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Jun 21, 2008 6:02 PM #161865
when blue knocks black down at the end, he hits the ground WAYYYY too fast for him to not bounce at all.

Apart from that, its nice.
Oh, and perhaps change that bit of smoke, it breaks apart strangely. Too linear, if you know what I mean.
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Jun 22, 2008 7:39 AM #162711
Quote from SSJBryando
unlike lixu said there are clearly some flaws. not very big ones, but he resizes REALLY bad, also its way to fast, to see what's going on. but it was nice. =3

STILL too fast? *changes to 5 fps*
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when blue knocks black down at the end, he hits the ground WAYYYY too fast for him to not bounce at all.

Apart from that, its nice.
Oh, and perhaps change that bit of smoke, it breaks apart strangely. Too linear, if you know what I mean.

The layers were being retarded when I drew that smoke and now it's stuck there forever. Goddamnit >:[

And yeah, I'll fix the hitting the ground part.
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Jun 22, 2008 7:55 AM #162721
Update #2

http://www.antiup.net/view/4982/
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Jun 22, 2008 10:43 AM #162879
http://www.stickpageportal.com/watchmovie/blackvblue.html
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Jun 22, 2008 6:09 PM #163199
Pretty much resizing, and smoe movements are just wrong.

Still, creative moves and so. Nice work.
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