Aww, I killed myself :*C

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Jun 21, 2008 5:54 PM #161853
http://www.antiup.net/view/4892/

Comments, crit, etc?
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Jun 21, 2008 5:56 PM #161856
It's awesome... and... emotional?
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Jun 21, 2008 6:01 PM #161864
I didn't like the blood.

Like, not enough frames or something. And it was ugly.
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Jun 21, 2008 6:06 PM #161873
Quote from RazrBlade
It's awesome... and... emotional?


Lol thanks. Emotional? :P

Quote from Schwa
I didn't like the blood.

Like, not enough frames or something. And it was ugly.


Um.. ugly? explain please.
Also, I know what you mean about the blood. Thanks.
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Jun 21, 2008 6:10 PM #161876
whoa thats.... quite aa lot of blood
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Jun 21, 2008 6:12 PM #161878
terkoiz is that you? good animation.
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Jun 21, 2008 6:16 PM #161882
You didnt have to steal terkoizes moves mesmay. (;0.....jK)

I didn't like the blood, It dissolves to fast, it drops to fast (just look at the ground the whole animation). Also the blood on the wall is really poo poo color, make it less dark. Try cutting yourself open (lol don't) but if you bleed, your blood is clearly redish, this looks mega ultra darkish.

but the movements were ok. a bit resizing but it was good. =|
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Jun 21, 2008 6:33 PM #161897
i do not understand this huge craze of suicides...

anyways the blood was rough other then that great job
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Jun 21, 2008 6:43 PM #161913
It's fun to animate.
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Jun 21, 2008 7:12 PM #161964
A good entry.

I don't have to say anything. The scores 8.5/10 and 10/10 SAY IT ALL

Very good but slightly hurried.
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Jun 21, 2008 8:48 PM #162144
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Lol thanks. Emotional? :P



Um.. ugly? explain please.
Also, I know what you mean about the blood. Thanks.


I mean the blood was ugly.

And also go make comments in my thread.
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Jun 21, 2008 11:08 PM #162293
Yes master.
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Jun 22, 2008 1:13 AM #162405
hey great animation man!for how do you animate on flash? just one thing, when the blood falls, there's none on the ground..you could add that to your anim to make it more realistic!
keep with the good job! =]
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Jun 22, 2008 1:15 AM #162407
try to avoid wall blood, unless you stick is right next to one. and if you do that type of blood, make it squirt the way he stabs ;)

and i think you have overdone the camera shake .
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Jun 22, 2008 6:08 AM #162656
LMAOOOOO,

well blood needs some work, it's stylish, but somethings not right about it.

awesome though C: