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Blur/Angle animation test

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Jun 16, 2013 10:19 AM #1008955
Hey guys! This is my newest animation... a Blur and angle test, also the first animation i made with my new tablet :D
I hope you enjoy it!
http://www.filz.us/view/80581a79-5a3/
Tell me what you think of it
Also it is a bit choppy here and there
but overall i think its kinda good.... perhaps
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Jun 17, 2013 4:54 AM #1009790
The movements were very wobbly, but I do like your effort.
The animation lacked many principles of animation though. I suggest learning from this: http://strills.deviantart.com/art/Strills-Tutorial-117161497 (It's not finished, but it has enough information for you to learn from).
Overall, I think you need to practice on basic movements before you move to angles, but nice use of the blur effect and I like the effort you put in this.
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Jun 17, 2013 7:34 AM #1009883
woobly movements, but the concept looks great!
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Jun 17, 2013 9:49 AM #1009952
Thank you guys :3
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Jun 18, 2013 4:55 AM #1010798
Haha, I enjoyed it a lot even though the movements could use a lot of work. That grunt the black stickfigure blurted out made me lose it.

Keep studying other animations - I didn't understand easing in limbs until I practiced it on my own, a looooooong time ago. Keep at it!
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Jun 18, 2013 5:03 AM #1010801
just a tip, if you blur in only one direction, it looks a lot nicer in my opinion
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Jun 18, 2013 5:41 AM #1010826
I noticed that you tried to make it smoother by putting more frames but it looks wobbly and too slow
You wanna make it so that its smooth and fast enough and not wobbly
Double frame maybe?
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Jun 18, 2013 1:36 PM #1011384
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Haha, I enjoyed it a lot even though the movements could use a lot of work. That grunt the black stickfigure blurted out made me lose it.

Keep studying other animations - I didn't understand easing in limbs until I practiced it on my own, a looooooong time ago. Keep at it!

Thanks :3
just a tip, if you blur in only one direction, it looks a lot nicer in my opinion

I dont think i understand how to do what you just said
I noticed that you tried to make it smoother by putting more frames but it looks wobbly and too slow
You wanna make it so that its smooth and fast enough and not wobbly
Double frame maybe?

yeah i kinda double framed alot but it looked like it was jumping FPS's
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Jun 18, 2013 7:32 PM #1011637
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I dont think i understand how to do what you just said

He means that you shouldn't blur the x and y so that it looks like a cloud or something
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Jun 18, 2013 11:52 PM #1011806
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He means that you shouldn't blur the x and y so that it looks like a cloud or something


alright
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Jun 20, 2013 11:25 AM #1013372
I found that the whole animation was a little slow-moving. Don't hesitate to use less frames for attacks that are supposed to be quick. Otherwise, I like the artwork, and the sound and blood effects were good.
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Jun 20, 2013 2:58 PM #1013609
Quote from TheBlaman
I found that the whole animation was a little slow-moving. Don't hesitate to use less frames for attacks that are supposed to be quick. Otherwise, I like the artwork, and the sound and blood effects were good.

yeah thanks :D
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