Armor Practice

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Jun 16, 2013 4:10 PM #1009216
Hey Everyone So I've Drew An Armor And decide to color it on Flash !
so yeah that what iI end up to

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Anyway I Want Cncs Cause I Really Wanna Practice Armors More ? Thanks :)
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Jun 16, 2013 4:12 PM #1009217
You should force yourself to stop using linear colors.
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Jun 16, 2013 4:19 PM #1009222
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You should force yourself to stop using linear colors.


Well Yeah I Did Recently On My Weapons ! But I Rushed This One A Bit At Coloring ! Cause there's a lot of scales ! Indicate the high light and shading area for each one would take a lot of time !
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Jun 16, 2013 4:30 PM #1009230
If your excuse is laziness you shouldn't post it. If you're too lazy to put effort into it why should we put effort into criticizing? You also have some proportion issues. The hands are too tiny, the forearms are too huge, and the upper arms are too little.
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Jun 16, 2013 4:31 PM #1009231
This is basicly triangles and linear.
Do a better design next time. Keep the classical iron armor design and ad your own specificities.
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Jun 16, 2013 4:40 PM #1009236
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If your excuse is laziness you shouldn't post it. If you're too lazy to put effort into it why should we put effort into criticizing? You also have some proportion issues. The hands are too tiny, the forearms are too huge, and the upper arms are too little.


Well Not lazyness ! I won't Do that again :p
Beside i've drew that so i wanna Cnc about the shape ! and that's what you did thanks :D
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Jun 16, 2013 5:17 PM #1009266
The line art is beyond messy, the way the style changes with the hands compared to everywhere else looks bad and once again, traced.
The colouring hasn't actually been thought through; you've just slapped gradients everywhere with filters smacked on the top.
There are a lot of positions with proportion.
Last of all, the laziness excuse really doesn't work this time, because every time there's a problem with something, you were "too lazy" or you "rushed" it. If you can't be bothered to take your time and make an actual effort to your artwork, don't post it, because you're just wasting your own time with it.
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Jun 18, 2013 7:19 AM #1010885
The point is it doesn't look anything much like an "armour", atleast to me. DO use some good references before you actually start putting down the shapes, it really helps. (however no tracing :p )

^And yeah what they said.