Ritchie's new demo

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Jun 17, 2013 12:35 PM #1010076
So i decided to make new demo for my RHG because i thought the old ones were out dated. Its got little bit Nhazul's style in it ;) Enjoy!
http://findood.deviantart.com/#/art/New-demo-for-Ritchie-378567590?_sid=2b7d1f4a

My RHG page with update
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Jun 17, 2013 4:02 PM #1010271
Pretty good there. It was mostly smooth and the timing was right, but it was hard to tell what the first hit was. I know it was a kick, but it seemed badly executed.
Overall, good work.
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Jun 17, 2013 8:04 PM #1010456
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Pretty good there. It was mostly smooth and the timing was right, but it was hard to tell what the first hit was. I know it was a kick, but it seemed badly executed.
Overall, good work.


Okey, i see what you mean, tryed to make a stylish kick thingy that obviously didn't work. Watched it so many time that i didn't notice it was unclear, but thanks for the comment!
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Jun 17, 2013 8:41 PM #1010492
There wasnt enough force on the last drop kick. And did you make the smoke effect yourself? It wasnt bad.

Btw not bad for a zetabrand style sort of animation. It reminded me of Tentionmaru or nhazuls work.
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Jun 17, 2013 8:47 PM #1010498
Cool, it was nice and simple. I think some of the landings could've used some more frames though, instead of just free-transforming it.
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Jun 17, 2013 8:47 PM #1010500
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There wasnt enough force on the last drop kick. And did you make the smoke effect yourself? It wasnt bad.

Btw not bad for a zetabrand style sort of animation. It reminded me of Tentionmaru or nhazuls work.


Yep, the last kick wasn't very forceful but didn't try to edit it because almost everythnig done when i notice it looked week and thanks the smoke was made by me but i'm not quit satisfied with it. It was late and i was tired when i made it, so i think i could make better. You'll soon see in my upcoming project. Thanks for commenting!

EDIT: @ Irian, when i look zetastyled anims especially Nhazuls and tentions (not shore if they still use it), they tend to free transform the landings and it has certain feel to it but i get it it's kinda lazy
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Jun 18, 2013 4:13 AM #1010774
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Yep, the last kick wasn't very forceful but didn't try to edit it because almost everythnig done when i notice it looked week and thanks the smoke was made by me but i'm not quit satisfied with it. It was late and i was tired when i made it, so i think i could make better. You'll soon see in my upcoming project. Thanks for commenting!

EDIT: @ Irian, when i look zetastyled anims especially Nhazuls and tentions (not shore if they still use it), they tend to free transform the landings and it has certain feel to it but i get it it's kinda lazy


I'm terrible at smoke so it looked good to me. Keep up the good work.
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Jun 18, 2013 4:52 AM #1010796
Nice job, I enjoyed it. The animation was smooth.

Good use of the stickfigures' colorways - they're very nostalgic ;)
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Jun 18, 2013 10:31 AM #1011175
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Nice job, I enjoyed it. The animation was smooth.

Good use of the stickfigures' colorways - they're very nostalgic ;)


Thanks man!