this is my first storyline animation... i think.

c&c please

things not to include cuz i already know

1) choppy
2) bad physics

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/9836/sherbsstickymaniaxy9.gif

By steadels

I see no storyline, just some bitch running around killing some people doing nothing.

HE IS MURDERAH.

practice a bit more before trying a longer anim.

Veryy choppy, uneased and stiff


Move ever joint in each frame to prevent stiffness


and look for a tutorial for easing and smoothing

thanks guys... any more?

btw... the dude is killing people because the organization killed his father, im currently working on the trailer

ohh ok

still it doesn't make anysense