My artwork (in progress)

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Jun 20, 2013 12:36 AM #1012873
THESE ARE MY DRAWINGS.
Please give me feedback on my drawings and stuff. I'm going to start drawing quite often now so hopefully I will gain some skill.

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Jun 20, 2013 11:29 PM #1013926
Bump, new one added.
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Jun 20, 2013 11:36 PM #1013928
You're new so I won't give you an infraction, but keep in mind the only time you can bump your own thread is longer than two days or unless it's been about a day and you have some new stuff to post. You bumped this a few hours after you made it and double posted which is also against the rules. Just try to use some better judgement before you do that.

The artwork is neat that's for sure. I'm not sure how I would really criticize these. The newer one could be more define with the lines. Maybe invest in a ruler. It will also help to go back over some of your lines with a thicker pencil or pen to make the more important base lines stand out more.
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Jun 20, 2013 11:55 PM #1013932
Okay thanks. I went back over the newer on and redefined some lines and darkened some more shading.

I'll keep in mind the posting thing.