just thinking of makin a storyline animation, just wondering whether or not to continue it

The movement looks a little too robotish if you ask me...
I mean it isn't bad but its not fluid enough
If you get my jiz?

Oh and also, i wreckon you could make that into a storyline for sure, it has potential, is the green guy like a tracker or something whos looking for a dude who has been there recently?
That could be cool

yes the green guy is hunting him and someone says how can you tell, but they cant be seen, im gonna make them appear and please dont double post but thanks for the cc moar

That was great, did u make the green dude. Curious. Keep going with it, cant wait to see it

Nothing really to show there minus a run, and a few words. Continue it, add something worth watching, then post and ask.

Also, the camera movement needs more easing.

ok and thanks to bert i think it was for the blind bases

The running and walking need improvment. The camera movments could have used alot more easing.
Its all pretty stiff and theres not much actual animation there.
Sorry but I don't really like it :(

u cud turn the green guy to a ninja

note i have stopped making this and made another one called Super Blues vs Average Reds