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fullbody..please look

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Jun 28, 2008 11:45 PM #171012
well...my first fullbody ...i thought that the leg movements were stiff. but i think i got the grasp of things pretty well...
one thing i did like was the momentum and force...

http://www.antiup.net/view/5996/


edit...twas kinda sketchy though..
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Jun 28, 2008 11:48 PM #171015
Actually I quite like it. Smooth and I like the sketchy style.

One thing thought, make it longer!

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Jun 28, 2008 11:57 PM #171018
It's really good for just starting full body. I see only a couple problems, which can easily be fixed in the clean-up stage. The arm on our left is kind of uneven. The forearm starts out smaller than the rest and then gets normal. Also his foot on the bttom, also on our left, isn't very consistent. Not big problems, especially for full body, but it'd look weird when it's all cleaned up, you know?
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Jun 29, 2008 3:08 AM #171097
thanks

more comments please!!
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Jun 29, 2008 3:10 AM #171099
nice :D do you have a tab?
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Jun 29, 2008 3:13 AM #171104
Awsome, nice style, physics, the left legs size should be consistant, the head was a square, and a circle, keep on basic shape for now. I like the sketchy effect and style, keep at it, you'll do great.
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Jun 29, 2008 3:25 AM #171108
Arms got longer, knee too far down, all the stuff grubber said, not bad.
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Jun 29, 2008 2:58 PM #171454
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