Fullbody cartoon thingy :D

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Jul 2, 2013 2:40 AM #1024184
Made with mouse :D
http://filz.us/KyF
Time Taken: -\(o_O") i dunno know
Cnc??
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Jul 2, 2013 8:14 AM #1024306
Nice, smooth, I like it ^^
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Jul 2, 2013 9:58 AM #1024353
thanks
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Jul 2, 2013 11:22 AM #1024389
Looks good dude but go check up this short critique

The smoke looks just tweened or you just tweened it,do you?
The whoops looks bad because of the line thing,try to create a better trail :D
Is the head is fire?you should make particles or animate it good to make it cool.
At the dual upperscratch,the animation looks a bit choppy that makes it bad.

Anyways nice try dude :D
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Jul 3, 2013 7:57 AM #1025089
Not much animation to CnC, but it looks good lol

As said before, some of the effects could use some work. Maybe try doing tests with different styles in the near future?
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Jul 3, 2013 9:34 AM #1025136
kk thanks for CnC :)
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Jul 3, 2013 10:11 AM #1025144
Well... I suggest you to learn more about stick figure. You need stickfigure for the body construction e_e If I see your fullbody really close, you need to fix the construction. Then, you need to make the effects better ^^ and force! You need force!
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Jul 3, 2013 12:13 PM #1025202
oh lol kk i will learn and btw about stick construction
i did more beautiful than before here if you wanna see it
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?72025-Granade-Fail
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Jul 4, 2013 5:54 AM #1025853
Quote from Frostneuroz
oh lol kk i will learn and btw about stick construction
i did more beautiful than before here if you wanna see it
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?72025-Granade-Fail


U MADE THAT SMOKE?!? O_O
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Jul 4, 2013 6:11 AM #1025856
Quote from theexceld9
U MADE THAT SMOKE?!? O_O


He credited it dude lol