wRHG Tournament R1: Cruz & Zeno (Azure Kite) vs Zero (blakphoenix)
Started by: Hewitt | Replies: 18 | Views: 2,367
Jul 8, 2013 4:56 AM #1028971
How my characters converse? Is there a problem with my dialogues? I'd like it if you could elaborate on that a bit. :)
Jul 8, 2013 6:21 PM #1029375
It just seemed forced some of the speech. It made me think "now who the hell would say that?" Not neccesarily their meanings made me lose alittle immersion, but the phrasing just seemed heavy handed.
Jul 8, 2013 6:31 PM #1029382
Ok. I think I can dig it. Thanks for that. :D
Jul 9, 2013 12:59 AM #1029610
No problem, you CnC so you can help people improve. CnC's taught me alot about what I was doing wrong, so if I can help out some other people... Mission complete!