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Jul 5, 2013 3:13 PM #1026713
this is ma 1st flash animation.comment the mistakes plz.http://zxzhar.deviantart.com/art/Run-kick-383096055?ga_submit_new=10%253A1373037077
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Jul 5, 2013 3:39 PM #1026725
Yo! You need easing, also your stick figure doesn't seem painted right.
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Jul 6, 2013 9:23 AM #1027480
Easing is right.
Animation without easing is lifeless and robotic.
Definitely good for a first in flash.
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Jul 6, 2013 9:25 AM #1027482
What the others said about easing,
and also he looks very stiff, you used free transform a lot
and he hides behind the canvas at the end so it's difficult to understand what he's doing.
The jump seemed to go too high with the kick in comparison to the launch
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Jul 6, 2013 3:25 PM #1027651
what do you guys mean by easing??!
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Jul 7, 2013 10:22 AM #1028274
It's the gradual increase or decrease in spacing between frames.
It gives animation life. Feel free to look in the tutorial section for easing.