Okay, CnC time.
C-God: The animation on the sticks were a bit stiff, and the ending was anti-climatic. The music was an odd choice at first until it turned into dubstep. The tweens were good, and the effects were good, though it needs improvement.
Shadow9512: What fps were you on? The intro went really fast. The sticks were stiff and wobbly, the effects needs major improvement, and what's with everybody using the font? That font's old and outdated. The background is bland; hence that it's mostly a grey background than the actual environment. It needs serious touch-ups and such.
My vote goes to C-God. His anims seems a bit smoother and easier on the eyes.