Dominic "Sid" Faire (New Power: Chaos Leak)

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Jul 12, 2013 11:40 AM #1032867
I'll battle you if you want.
I think I´m out of the tournament, and in this way you can still write something and probably get a lot of CnC´s on your story because a lot of people are active.
However, if you agree to battle me then the deadline must be 28th of July, which is two weeks from now. I think that is enough time... The first round of the tournament was only 10 days.
I will CnC on the story for sure :)
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Jul 12, 2013 7:20 PM #1033275
Sure. Mind if we made it a SPAR? That way I don't feel too pressured and I can write more like me than a performer. Makes an even better CnC.
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Jul 12, 2013 7:24 PM #1033280
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Sure. Mind if we made it a SPAR? That way I don't feel too pressured and I can write more like me than a performer. Makes an even better CnC.


Sometimes doing something under pressure makes develop things you never even imagined you could. But sure.
But I'm not sure whether people will CnC on it or take is seriously, after all it's a spar.

26th of July? Ready? Set? Go!
Whoever finishes with their entry first has the privilege of not making the thread :P
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Jul 12, 2013 7:30 PM #1033284
But-I-ka-ich.......****! Deal!

Well in that case it won't be determined a SPAR or battle till the thread is made. I've got to get back to work atm, should we set a scene? Make some rules?
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Jul 15, 2013 8:12 PM #1036423
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But-I-ka-ich.......****! Deal!

Well in that case it won't be determined a SPAR or battle till the thread is made. I've got to get back to work atm, should we set a scene? Make some rules?


Nah, just do whatever pleases you. As long as it's not sex with my character.
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Jul 15, 2013 9:49 PM #1036510
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As long as it's not sex with my character.


Looks like Chance won't be having fun in the near future... ;)
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Jul 16, 2013 12:40 AM #1036687
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Nah, just do whatever pleases you. As long as it's not sex with my character.


What else am I supposed to do with your corpse? =/
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Jul 16, 2013 3:37 PM #1037143
Do Dominic and Sil speak? I've seen your demo but that was without conversation. I have no Idea how he speaks when he is insane. Or is he just rampaging and not speaking.

EDIT (one day later): I already started writing and you have been online but did not respond. I'm just going to assume he doesn't talk.
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Jul 17, 2013 8:08 PM #1038452
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Do Dominic and Sid speak? I've seen your demo but that was without conversation. I have no Idea how he speaks when he is insane. Or is he just rampaging and not speaking.

EDIT (one day later): I already started writing and you have been online but did not respond. I'm just going to assume he doesn't talk.


Sorry but I wasn't on yesterday after i got home. My phone keeps the page up so when I unlock it the internet runs in the background making it seem like Im on and viewing.

Yes they can both talk, but not very well. Dom stopped his education at 11, then had no one to converse with for 7 years. When he does talk he sounds like a dry whisper (think Gara from his first few appearances in Naruto). When he goes wild he barely speaks at all. When he does its just a yell of words like "kill, maim, rampage," and other savage sounding words. The Whispers on his hands are surprisingly coherent and speak at all times. They get louder the more insane Dom/Sid gets and they usually chant Sid until Dom gets to that point (they like to provoke him). After an insanity threshold is crossed they 3 voices (Sid and the 2 whispers) start to sound the same and even finish each other's, what is now, murderous sentences.

I can say more when im not at work
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Jul 17, 2013 8:52 PM #1038487
Alright this is enough thank you.

And I just discovered a huge grammar mistake :P

It's straitjacket not 'straight jacket". Unless you are trying to tell me the jacket is heterosexual of course, but I know thats not what you mean haha
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Jul 17, 2013 9:08 PM #1038496
See I thought it was one word too, but spellchecker insists it's 2 seperate words. Even searching the internet it corrects me to 2 words. But I have a feeling it's supposed to be one.

EDIT: oddly enough the jacket itself its quite gay.....I'm not sure why. It was his life choice, not mine.
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Jul 17, 2013 9:30 PM #1038504
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See I thought it was one word too, but spellchecker insists it's 2 seperate words. Even searching the internet it corrects me to 2 words. But I have a feeling it's supposed to be one.

EDIT: oddly enough the jacket itself its quite gay.....I'm not sure why. It was his life choice, not mine.




Read this:

Straitjacket

The long-sleeved garment used to bind a person’s arms tightly against the body is a straitjacket. The spelling derives from a little-used, mostly archaic definition of strait—i.e., tightly fitting. The word is commonly misspelled in a number of ways, including straightjacket, strait-jacket, straight-jacket, strait jacket, and straight jacket.
http://grammarist.com/spelling/straitjacket/

And another confirmation:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Straight_jacket

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Jul 18, 2013 12:17 PM #1038884
THANK YOU! I'm not insane lol
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Jul 29, 2013 5:17 PM #1051565
We should fight birt. I feel like a half demon and a chaos incarnate would make a destructive and awesome fight.
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Jul 29, 2013 7:09 PM #1051657
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We should fight birt. I feel like a half demon and a chaos incarnate would make a destructive and awesome fight.


O.O
.......funk. I never thought of that. We did have that conflict in the OC, AND you have one of the best names in this lounge lol. Yeah I wouldn't mind another fight, but mind waiting a few days to confirm? I'm up for it but I have a few responsibilities around here that are kinda up in the air.