http://www.filz.us/view/8c2e1a2d-c38/

Finally started animating again. Tried some head first cause having rust wasn't challenging enough but decided that headfirst really isn't my thing.

CnC is obviously welcome, be it with consideration of my wustyness c;

Oh hey, it's MisterDaan! I haven't seen you in a long while. How goes things?

As for your animation, the rustiness is definitely obvious, and I'd like to give you my crits on it.

The entire animation had a bit of choppiness, which was apparent for me for each test. Also, the attacks that your sticks have done in your tests looked a little weak, since I didn't see a lot of force put into them.

The walking test was a little weird, too. The stick figure walked a bit awkwardly, and it didn't really give the impression of a solid walk. The legs rose weirdly away from the rest of the body whenever the stick decided to take another step, which caused the whole walk to look very strange.

I know you're getting back into animation, but these are just some problems I spotted out while watching this. It's great to have you back, and keep improving! :D

Hey Tsang, it goes well apart from the animating bit of course :c

Thanks for the cnc. The akward walk is the part where I was like fuck head first as apperently I can't animate a walk with head first so yeah I noticed that. I'll try to work on the choppiness.