Back to basics, practice for anticipation.

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Jul 12, 2013 2:52 AM #1032258
When in doubt just go back to basics. I honestly felt better doing simple movements then doing something crazy right away
The short animation just shows a quick simple movements. The laser was just a "screw it" moment. Who doesn't like lasers? Anyways feel free to tell me whats not good, what needs improvement, and what to focus on.

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Jul 12, 2013 4:26 AM #1032387
Nice. Though, I might wanna say that the anticipation could be a bit longer. Not too much, though. Good Work! Double thumbs up. Very smooth. I'm A FIRIN' mah LAZOR!!
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Jul 12, 2013 4:27 AM #1032390
Quote from MatrixNinja2000(Naimad)
Nice. Though, I might wanna say that the anticipation could be a bit longer. Not too much, though. Good Work! Double thumbs up. Very smooth. I'm A FIRIN' mah LAZOR!!


Pffft. Gotta show the lasers some love :D. And thanks! So maybe one or two more frames to the anticipation maybe? And when I keep watching it another thing that pops out is Easing.
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Jul 12, 2013 6:00 AM #1032507
great work dude.The only thing that bothered me was the last shot.The hands seemed like they were inside his pocket.Make the hands move while kicking.If u really meant to do it,then its fine.It was really smooth and the blast was also good.Keep up the good work.
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Jul 12, 2013 6:02 AM #1032509
Its really nice ^^ Keep it going ^^
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Jul 12, 2013 6:12 PM #1033213
Quote from Anime Vishal
great work dude.The only thing that bothered me was the last shot.The hands seemed like they were inside his pocket.Make the hands move while kicking.If u really meant to do it,then its fine.It was really smooth and the blast was also good.Keep up the good work.


Sadly, the hands in his pockets was intended V.V. I should have made the arms move but as ideas for a character that's one of his little unique features using his pockets. And thanks ^.^
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Jul 12, 2013 6:39 PM #1033241
it was stop-n-go and the colors were way too hard to differenciate, replace him with a white color or something. also who runs and does a kick with their hands in their pockets?