Fullbody tests

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Jul 14, 2013 10:23 PM #1035701
Here are 3 anims a made that are non-stickfigure. all 30fps
Walking: http://www.filz.us/view/8922e5b9-182/

Archery: http://www.filz.us/view/acd2a5d8-544/

Not really fullbody but a water droplet test:
http://www.filz.us/view/0a62c3ce-7e8/

I want full 100% CnC on this cuz i really want to improve on this.
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Jul 14, 2013 10:35 PM #1035712
Well I would say that the construction of the body looks unrealistic. But that's pretty much it. And the water physics are a little off but other than that good job.
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Jul 14, 2013 10:37 PM #1035714
Great job over all
The walking one, watch out for resizing.

Archery, it needs more force. I loved that angle shift. The arrow looked too much like jelly when it hit the target.

Water droplet, the only problem was the ripples got smaller. They should get bigger and farther apart and then dissolve
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Jul 14, 2013 10:40 PM #1035718
Quote from ProTitanium
Well I would say that the construction of the body looks unrealistic. But that's pretty much it. And the water physics are a little off but other than that good job.


Im assuming youre talking about the first one with the body construction? or is it also the second one?
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Jul 15, 2013 3:01 AM #1035847
The first one, I felt you could make it so the person put more force in their pull, the bow closer to then, to give the feel like they know a deadly and accurate shot.

Second one? So much win, smooth just needs to have more ripples going farther apart and disappearing like someone else said.
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Jul 15, 2013 10:05 PM #1036523
I can tell your sketch took a bit time to do because of how you drew the outline rather than a sketch/reference/guide. The sketched outline is also drawn pretty meticulously by the number of careful strokes on them. Sketches SHOULDN'T take long to make. They should be quick, so for you to get a picture of it, and EASY. They shouldn't take more than it's worth because by the end of it you're essentially wasting your time. A finished product doesnt give a shit about sketches.

With this pace and technique, I can guarantee that you won't finish this as you would have intended because you will be burnt out and exhausted once you just finish sketching it.

The point is, that people don't care about sketches.
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Jul 15, 2013 10:16 PM #1036542
In the archery one. It looks like she's sad and staring at the ground or something, while she's shooting. I think she should aim for her target, even though she doesn't seem to need to, because, she did hit the bull's eye.
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Jul 15, 2013 10:19 PM #1036549
Thanks for the cnc guys! also I found out that doing sketches with line instead of brush is much easier and quicker and so i will usethat from now on!