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Jul 21, 2013 1:33 PM #1041931
http://www.filz.us/view/c8ad7412-3bc/

what do you guys think?


UPDATE

is there too much blood? dont want to make things confusing

http://www.filz.us/view/e10f8990-c26/

UPDATE IN WHITE

http://www.filz.us/view/dbd26b17-cb4/

does this look better or should i keep it in black?
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Jul 21, 2013 1:40 PM #1041935
Your unfinished shit is smoother than my finished masterpieces.
Dammit xD
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Jul 21, 2013 2:53 PM #1042035
Quote from cryptik

Also very good for my eyes.

One of the best styles-like-cosmo I have ever seen, I tried it myself a few times, but I could never figure it out :/ Good work
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Jul 21, 2013 3:03 PM #1042047
Good job bro! Keep it going ^^
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Jul 21, 2013 3:32 PM #1042077
thanks guys!
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Jul 21, 2013 4:15 PM #1042106
Definitely keep the black, and there's a buttload of blood, but, is suits your style. It's great.
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Jul 21, 2013 4:32 PM #1042120
ok will do. thanks!
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Jul 22, 2013 8:49 AM #1042720
Looks good. Keep the black.

Also, with the blood, try making the appearance of the splat two frames instead of just one.
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Jul 22, 2013 10:43 AM #1042787
Quote from Telepurte
Looks good. Keep the black.

Also, with the blood, try making the appearance of the splat two frames instead of just one.


thanks. I will. but the problem with the blood is that theres so much of that it really hard to animate it moving. Also I tried that, but because I'm using such a low fps it looks a bit weird.
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Jul 22, 2013 10:53 AM #1042795
An example of funny blood you could try : http://www.filz.us/view/8759f8e6-dfb/
I find it very cute and neat O_o

KEEP DA BLAK
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Jul 22, 2013 11:07 AM #1042798
THAT'S SO HARD TO DO, also thats 24 fps. I operate at 12-15
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Jul 22, 2013 1:00 PM #1042858
Good job I like the smoothness...
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Jul 23, 2013 5:00 AM #1043436
Black looked best! Reminded me of a chalkboard or sum shyt, but yeah, really liking the techni-color thing going on!
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Jul 23, 2013 8:39 AM #1043516
Usually if the blood just pops there with one frame it's harsh on the eye, which is why you add another frame which is a bit after the blood just pops there so it's a bit more eased on the eye.
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Jul 23, 2013 8:26 PM #1044076
Quote from Telepurte
Usually if the blood just pops there with one frame it's harsh on the eye, which is why you add another frame which is a bit after the blood just pops there so it's a bit more eased on the eye.


In dunno if you can tell, but I actually did that. the fps is weird so it probably made it look like I didn't do it
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