Long time to post in stickpage
someone maybe have seen there work before
http://www.filz.us/files/07f8fa90/5a9/Untitled-2.jpg
Andddddddddd
http://www.filz.us/files/68f16109/201/Windy_Uniform.jpg
I'm not post the picture in this post because it's too big
CnC,please? 'w'
Corpy and Windy
Started by: Papiga | Replies: 1 | Views: 385
Jul 28, 2013 3:47 AM #1049556
Jul 28, 2013 6:28 AM #1049727
I enjoy both of these pictures. They have a definite anime taste, but the flavor is slightly toony as well. Not bad. ^^
As far as critiques go, I do have a number of them. I notice the webs between the first girl's fingers look a little stubby, and the fingers on the hand gripping the dagger aren't proportional. And there's a fifth finger along her knuckles, so your numbering is a little off. The tie around her neck comes out at a wrong angle, like its protruding somewhat from the center of her clavicle. Her eyes are nice, but the glare in each don't align with each other, and her glasses are a bit crooked to where I assume her ears are.
The second girl doesn't have many that I immediately notice. Her hand and arm look kind of like noodles in the way they bend, and the fingers again are slightly disproportionate. And again, the bow isn't aligned right, but this time with center of her shirt.
This is my CnC. ^^ I'm not an artist, simply a viewer with words to spare. I hope this helped. And I really do like them :) keep it up and keep getting better.
As far as critiques go, I do have a number of them. I notice the webs between the first girl's fingers look a little stubby, and the fingers on the hand gripping the dagger aren't proportional. And there's a fifth finger along her knuckles, so your numbering is a little off. The tie around her neck comes out at a wrong angle, like its protruding somewhat from the center of her clavicle. Her eyes are nice, but the glare in each don't align with each other, and her glasses are a bit crooked to where I assume her ears are.
The second girl doesn't have many that I immediately notice. Her hand and arm look kind of like noodles in the way they bend, and the fingers again are slightly disproportionate. And again, the bow isn't aligned right, but this time with center of her shirt.
This is my CnC. ^^ I'm not an artist, simply a viewer with words to spare. I hope this helped. And I really do like them :) keep it up and keep getting better.