HipsterNinja(Again)

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Jul 29, 2013 12:57 PM #1051321
I had this one old drawing that I really liked,
So,
I drew it again except better
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CnC or comment or both and stuff
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Jul 29, 2013 1:14 PM #1051345
I love it.
But there's some issues, around the crotch area, there's no lighting as the rest of the pants have it no problem. Makes it look sort of unfinished in that sense. Plus the kneecaps seem to be poking out of his legs in a rather awkward looking way.
Despite that, the anatomy is well done and I'm impressed. Keep it up.
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Jul 29, 2013 7:44 PM #1051690
Oh man, this looks awesome! It's super colorful and the use of the lighting kicks ass. I especially like the dimensions of the right side, it definitely looks like it's closer to the viewer than the left side. My favorite though, would have to be the portions of glass that partially cover a specific part of body or tool, and it warps the image behind it. That, sir, is attention to detail. ^^ BA.

Critiques? I have to agree with Charry, some shading in the crotch area, mostly the left thigh, is kind of lacking. It almost looks like it's not attached to the knee which is almost right in our face. The shading in the ninja stars could have been detailed more too, I understand that the smallest point is meant to be furthest from the POV, but they kind of looked a bit misshapen. And his right foot looks a bit strange at the bend and heel, maybe another shading issue.

I'm not an artist, just a viewer with words to spare.

This is a sick drawing, and I fully enjoy it. You rock Drone.
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Jul 29, 2013 7:52 PM #1051699
Where's his right eye.
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Jul 29, 2013 8:09 PM #1051714
Thanks for the CnC guys
There's always room for further improvement
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Where's his right eye.

It's a thing I did in the original drawing, so I did it again to keep the same feel
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Jul 29, 2013 8:11 PM #1051716
Quote from Drone
Thanks for the CnC guys
There's always room for further improvement

It's a thing I did in the original drawing, so I did it again to keep the same feel


I know what you were going for. It would've looked much better if you put it there even though it's dark but make it all white and glow.