Practice (Unfinished)

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Jul 31, 2013 8:35 PM #1053841
I have been practicing animating, so I decided to post my first practice. Its short, but I think I did good, for my first time:

http://www.filz.us/view/161d6d93-9f2/

How did I do?
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Aug 1, 2013 4:34 AM #1054173
Smooth but the flow doesn't work,you should study this parts even better:

•Flow.
•Easing.
•Proper Movements.

btw here's my review.

Well the flow doesn't work at all,the arm at the first part looks very fast to lift up.
The foot at the upper kick was smooth but the falling part looks weird,it should bend like a clipper then fall straight,after that continue his move.
The punch after the kick was a little obvious because the animation shake a little before attacking,it must stay at the position then whoosh.
That last stand form looks bad because the easing doesn't exist at that part,it must move a little then tadaa!.

8/10