Make the eyes smaller, in proportion to the face. And the arms look like sticks; when your arms are oriented like that they're bent, or should be bent. They're also a little too long, and you should define the shoulders, biceps + triceps, and forearms a tad more, to get rid of that "stick" look. Where the hair meets the eye-patch, the eye-patch should completely overlap the hair.

Good drawing exceld C:

Whoa!! Finally! A proper cnc! Thank you wip :) I see.. Anyway, I think the big eye justa style lol.. I got it.. I'll make a better one next time :I

it's good. level the shoulders and the arms are too long, i know it's a female but, i might need new glasses, but i thought for a moment it was a guy. try defining it more if it's a woman by adding definition to the chest or the body frame. i still think it's good :)

Well.. How about she is a flat chested o.O anyway, thank you :) I understood.. And yeah u need to buy a new glasses.. Maybe for -8 lens XD jk

aside from anatomy the one thing that's unappealing is the lack of diverse values; everything's the same shade of grey lol

it'll take a while to do properly but with pencil drawings it'd be good to learn how to shade different parts of the drawing darker or lighter depending on what the object is. for example, the hair in this picture should be lighter than the vest, and her skin shouldn't be the same color as both items. i figure that stuff like that is a result of your scanner options, but it still doesn't hurt to practice

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Well.. How about she is a flat chested o.O anyway, thank you :) I understood.. And yeah u need to buy a new glasses.. Maybe for -8 lens XD jk

lol you kinda just called it right. i do need new glasses now. mine were chewed up by a puppy this morning :P but that's why i have two pairs XD
like a boss..... jk

but it does seem like you tried to add detail to her chest but erased it or something :p

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lol you kinda just called it right. i do need new glasses now. mine were chewed up by a puppy this morning :P but that's why i have two pairs XD
like a boss..... jk

but it does seem like you tried to add detail to her chest but erased it or something :p

LOL... I'll fix it and post it in here again XD later... And I meant it >:I Buy a new glasses.. Seems you don't like a flat chested girl LMAO

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aside from anatomy the one thing that's unappealing is the lack of diverse values; everything's the same shade of grey lol

it'll take a while to do properly but with pencil drawings it'd be good to learn how to shade different parts of the drawing darker or lighter depending on what the object is. for example, the hair in this picture should be lighter than the vest, and her skin shouldn't be the same color as both items. i figure that stuff like that is a result of your scanner options, but it still doesn't hurt to practice

Hmm... So, let me straight this up... You meant, I need to make it more color full (black;black-grey;grey;grey-white;white) I see.. Thank you Timford ^^


Guys, you helped me so much :) thank you again ;)