Yoze (my charater)

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Aug 11, 2013 3:22 AM #1062527
i made yoze in flash 8

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Aug 14, 2013 3:01 AM #1065007
It's blurry but I can see the image. Looks good to me as far as I can see.
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Aug 14, 2013 3:59 AM #1065042
colors wud be nice,
teach me hair :OO
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Aug 14, 2013 2:37 PM #1065345
1) It's difficult to fully make out the drawing.
2) Manga/anime heads aren't circular.
3) The arms are completely straight and it looks really weird.
4) The hands are unusually rectangular and they don't go along with the style of the rest of the drawing.
5) The line art is very messy.
6) This character looks way too much like Hatsune Miku.