Quote from ChamelSo... Fighting Chance is a no? XD
Anyway~ the only gripe I really have with your works is how you portrayed Saint.. He seemed a little too violent and I'm not sure if saintmccaw woukd done so... But that's about it... Great reads :D Error wins my vote though, like blak-burd previously stated: it's more fulfilling.
Something has to trigger it. It's odd. Sometimes I'm like "meh" other times I pass out. But you definitely don't get out of a fight with me for thatlol
His actions were definitely violent (he's an ungodly brawler) but I like to think he was more..."playful" then violent with his speech and overall demeanor. But it's whatever, I still liked writing it =P