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Aug 14, 2013 7:57 AM #1065127
Hello everyone,

Im making a story and i really need help.
Its about war, Just like stick war 2,
So i need help and anyone who helps me will get that book for free,
for others its gonna be for 2 dollars
ill have a lot of them in stock,
soo yeah.
Help me please!

By: Mashal / Alko / Kiro

Mashal (Me):Hello,I hope you have a good day!
Alko (my friend) : Apples,Oranges,Carrot and beans help lower cholestrol
Kiro (also a friend) : A friend goes when you cry, A best friend cries when you go.

Please help us!
:D

Heres is the story: Ive only done 1 chapter so far:p


WORLD WAR 5 IN THE FUTURE

Kraken was born at 1-2-1988. He was praised for his skills and drawings of wars and armies. He was born in the Era of Borness, the Era when most of the girls were born. He was the son of the commander Mourinho. Mourinho was a skilled commander who commands the army and teaches them how to quick scope, Dolphin dive, 360 kill and all those various types of skills.

Kraken was only 10 years old when his dad took place in world war 3. His dad later died at 27-10-2002. But Before Mourinho died he said swiftly and slowly to Kraken: “Dear son, you must be a good commander like me. Even if you can’t become a commander you need to be in the army. I will leave for you only 500 dollars. It’s all I have. Don’t go into the paparazean army.”

WORD WAR 3
World war 3 took place in 30-12-1999. Mourinho left a letter to Kraken saying the names of a lot of People in the army: “Sergeant Ramsey, Sergeant Garzoun, Sergeant Lerposley, Riot Leare, Riot Shavi, Captain Price, Assistant Captain Yuri, Admiral Briggs, And the commander after my death, Corporal Restain. Have a long life. And my wish, Corporal Kraken”.

LIFE OF KRAKEN
Kraken lived all his life until he was 30 with his Friend Evan, in a little cottage near Ivy village. Evan said he wanted to join the army as well, But only if Kraken joins. So when Kraken was 28 years old, He called his Dads friend, Corporal Restain and said he wanted to join the army. So when they were 30 they joined the army. Evan was given Rank Sergeant and so was Kraken.

Kraken was really good in fighting because he was in boxing class and Shooter class. He even played a lot of games that are related to fighting like Black Ops 2, Counter Strike, Black shot And a lot more of those games. But kraken really liked fighting and actually described it in his own words: “Fighting is my dream, Death is the horror, Victory and Defeat are results of it”.


WORLD WAR 5 IN THE FUTURE. CHAPTER 1. KRAKEN MOURINHO ARAZABEAL. AUTHOR ALKO KIRO. Heypdude@Gmail.com

i dont think its going to be the best story in the world!
Of course it wont!:rolleyes:

Edit:

I hope you like the story!
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Aug 14, 2013 8:20 AM #1065140
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Aug 14, 2013 8:54 AM #1065154
All right... I don't understand any of it yet, but I'll be very blunt with you: I won't be helping because I don't like the idea. It's unoriginal, and it's incomprehensible. World War is a regularly explored topic already; you're not adding anything special to the mix other than a crazy idea about this guy with superpowers, which is even less original than world war.

Edit: I was a little too harsh, but I really, really, really hated that plot. And the fact that you can't even communicate what it should be across to us doesn't give credence to your writing skills either.
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Sep 9, 2013 11:40 AM #1081752
Before Mourinho died he said swiftly and slowly to Kraken: “Dear son, you must be a good commander like me. Even if you can’t become a commander you need to be in the army. I will leave for you only 500 dollars. It’s all I have. Don’t go into the paparazean army.
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