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Masaru- The Frozen Warrior

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Aug 14, 2013 8:33 PM #1065504
Name: Masaru- The Frozen Warrior



Abilities

Ice spear- Masaru's Ice spear is his main weapon. It is a long,(5 feet) metallic gold rod that is nearly indestructible. The tip is a lucid, gleaming crystal of an unknown substance that can cut through solid steel an inch thick if given enough force. The weapon is very heavy, and can only be wielded by an ice samurai with a strong will.
Ice shurikens- Kept in various pockets on his battle clothes, Masaru has trained for many years with these. he can hit a moving target from up to 50 yards and cause a deep wound. If aimed right, they can cause severe pain and bleeding. Some of these have traces of poison, so when they melt, the victim experiences extreme headaches and pain for up to a short but potentially deadly 10 minutes.
Divine blade- If the warrior has lost his spear or is in dire conditions, he can summon the mysterious divine blade. made with pure Crystals, only the village chief and his associates knew about the powers of the divine blade. It is curved inward at a slight angle for maximum protection. Also, it gives Masaru insane speed and strength.
Ice manipulation- Masaru has learned some of the tribes best techniques because of his skill. he can take any water or ice and make small shields out of this. he can also fashion small weapons.
Frost aura- The warrior carries with him a presence of extreme cold- he autonomously chills the area to about 0- Celsius. It can be felt in areas of up to 50 yards away from him.(32 Fahrenheit)


Weaknesses

-Masaru is not the strongest in the world(Although he is above average), so if the opponent is extremely strong, he can be easily overpowered.
-He is limited to only about 6 Ice Shurikens per battle.
-Heat weakens him considerably, so if he is fighting in a extremely hot and/or humid environment, it will damage his stamina.
-The divine blade will only stay in existence for a minute before teleporting back to its home dimension. Also, it can only be used once per day.
-Although he is the best livingcrystal warrior, there where still better fighters when his tribe was in full swing. As a result, some of the techniques have been lost and Marasu can only manipulate small amounts of ice. Also, he cannot conjure it out of thin air; he must take it from existing sources or can freeze water to make it.



Personality

This brawler has a moderately easy going personality, but will get very serious when in the middle of a combat situation. He will always try to make the first move in order to gain the upper hand, and is a very tactical brawler. He also tries to find the opponents weaknesses in order to get them to surrender quickly. Normally, he will not kill but if he holds a deep grudge against an opponent he will.

Appearance

Masaru is relatively short, being only 5'5. He always wears his battle clothes; black cloth from his knees to neck (for mobility) and a bandanna.
His hair is a light brown and held up by his bandanna. Would be long if he wore it down. He is also slightly muscular, but no huge build.

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Aug 14, 2013 11:48 PM #1065737
there is that word again "Indestructible"
Actually, I have no qualms about your wRHG though
couple of questions: what is the radius of the Frost Aura
on average what is the difference b/w Masaru and a normal human? What is the difference b/w Masaru using his sword vs using his spear? How many times can he summon the divine blade?
Could you elaborate on Masaru's behavior in genaral situations? How does he treat strangers vs friends? How does he deal with frustration, etc.
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Aug 15, 2013 12:21 AM #1065751
Okay! thanks for replying! I'll try to add all those answers in as soon as I can! :)

By the way, is there anything in particular i could get better at? I know i am a little shaky as I just started writing stories, so I would like as much help as possible!
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Aug 16, 2013 1:04 AM #1066547
Nice wRHG Glacier!brother.

Good luck in the battlefield my friend!

also, Try to tell if your AVAILABLE or UNAVAILABLE

And color your wins, losses, ties, etc Ex. 0/0/0

And make sure to link to your battle when you make one!
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