FullBody [Blck]

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Jul 2, 2008 12:51 PM #174508
First time animating a fullbody.
Decided to make it into a little loop =D
Due to gif. rape I will only provide the piv.
http://animatorhost.com/public/1215014477.piv
While you are quivering in its awsomness post C&C please.
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Jul 2, 2008 1:03 PM #174510
whoa, nice background!
lol
the guy looks a bit realistic also, actualy, very very realistic, but unfortunately, the actual anim aint amazing, i think its a bit overloaded, so its goin slow, dont say my comp is slow, its quite fast, but altogether.... 8.5/10!
the background effort (i think) 10/10!
the guy 9/10
the anim, 7/10
:)
keep it up!
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Jul 2, 2008 1:31 PM #174513
Not enough actual animation for me to C&C, so just continue it, I'm pretty sure it'll look good.

Did you make all the .stks yourself?
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Jul 2, 2008 1:47 PM #174519
Yesh, all sticks are made by me. It was my first fullbody stick, so was it okay?
And if anyone wants them they can use them but MUST give credit.
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Jul 2, 2008 1:53 PM #174522
I'd say it's good for starting out. The real person you should be asking is GhostFace, for he has made some really good fullbody sticks and animations.
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Jul 2, 2008 2:04 PM #174527
*Shouts to GhostFace: Get you'r ass over here and rate my full body!*
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Jul 2, 2008 2:13 PM #174532
HERE I BE..

Right i'll break it down...

Background

I liked the background, it had a cartoony essence to it, with simple details which weirdly enough gave it extra detail.
I saw no problems with the back ground.
Keep this style up.

Fullbody

I kinda like it, it's simply and not too complicated.
But what I find is that it's too blocky.
Try and define areas a lil more.
The feet could possibly do with another pivot point, to make them appear less stiff and more realistic.

The lower abdomen seems too bulky.
Maybe try slimming that down a lil more.

The hands are OK, but could do with a lil more definition too.


And that's about it...
It's lookin pretty good at the moment, keep up the hard work.

Oh jus a lil note, I've quit pivot.
I lacked in ideas for the DDC7 which I wished to be in and I have no other ideas for .stks to create.
I'll still be postin and helping out a few people I have respect for.
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Jul 2, 2008 4:26 PM #174614
Thanks for you'r post GhostFace.
Tomorrow I might have another shot at making a fullbody.
It's sad to see so many good pivoteres quiting Pivot. Are you moving on to another animating program, Flash prehaps?
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Jul 2, 2008 7:07 PM #174731
Holy Fucking Shit
u are a backgroud GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the full body was ok but the walk was wierd
but....did it take a year to make that background
the background almost looks liek flahs!!!
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Jul 2, 2008 7:30 PM #174759
holy s*** i like it, very nicely done, its a shame that ghostface is qutting.

btw, i usually find it a waste of hardrive to download .pivs, but this was an eception
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Jul 3, 2008 3:56 AM #175164
It's only a waste if you download a begginers piv. :P
But I aint a background God, elmo is. Got my insparation to do this from his animation: Negative

Thanks for you'r posts guys.
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Jul 3, 2008 5:18 AM #175214
I thinks there is some effort in that animation because of the fact that the back ground took all the space for the onion skin so it must've been hard to animate with it...
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Jul 3, 2008 5:21 AM #175222
Actually I find it quiet easy too animate without onion skin >_>
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Jul 3, 2008 6:01 AM #175250
make it a ****ing gif >:V
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Jul 3, 2008 7:45 AM #175306
The gif. rapes it terribly... so no.
It's a tiny file so if you can't be bothered to download it you don't deserve to watch it :/