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Aug 17, 2013 9:44 PM #1068090
Name- Origami

Strengths-
Being paper based: he's a very resilient wrhg.
Has the ability to form virtually any type of weapon using his paper.

Weaknesses:
Water- water will reduce the strength and durability of the paper causing Origami to be drastically weakened.
Fire- cause paper is flammable. However, the action of setting Origami on fire will create a flaming Wrhg for you to worry about.

Personality-
Adventerous

Alignment-
Neutral unless provoked

Appearance-
Is often seen as a slightly slender character. Inhumanly long arms.

Story-
Origami was originally a regular middle-aged man that seemed to have his life put together well. He had just taken a job at a printing facility and had just finished earning his way up the ranks. Until that fateful day where the nextdoor power plant experienced a meltdown destroying the factory on a leap year at the precise moment the celestial bodies were in perfect alignment on a blue moon. As the only survivor Origami suffered through medical expenses and treatments. However the doctors and other medical professionals were unable to diagnose the newfound abilities that Origami had over papers within his visinity.
While still in the hospital Origami was visited by federal government intelligence officers that attempted to persuade him into becoming a biological weapon they could use against enemies they had. Origami did not take kindly to the officers' attempts to take advantage of his ailment
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Aug 18, 2013 12:16 AM #1068122
You need to start putting a little more effort into your characters.

wRHG locked until the following can be provided to me or Xero through PM:
-A demo consisting of at least 300 words (this website might help).
-A battle history and battle points section.

Also, your story doesn't look finished.
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