I'm going to leave my demo and critique or advice me or tell me what bugs you.

here.

Maybe add his arms at the run,Explosion shouldn't turns white.

What? I was poor in English can not read。。。。。。。T-T

Quote from Hitsu

Maybe add his arms at the run,Explosion shouldn't turns white.

okay then.

Ahhh, I'm not going to lie to you. This isn't an rhg demo, it's a 5 minute (worked on time) pivot animation in flash animations clothing. It is very bad and really, you should be ashamed that this is your rhg demo. It doesn't have anything that should be in an rhg. I can't even really critique this. How dare you call this a demo! This is...!

To sum it all up, this is the Big Rigs of RHG Demos.

Big Rigs: http://www.gamespot.com/big-rigs-over-the-road-racing/reviews/big-rigs-over-the-road-racing-review-6086528/

Quote from Syclone903

Ahhh, I'm not going to lie to you. This isn't an rhg demo, it's a 5 minute (worked on time) pivot animation in flash animations clothing. It is very bad and really, you should be ashamed that this is your rhg demo. It doesn't have anything that should be in an rhg. I can't even really critique this. How dare you call this a demo! This is...!

I checked. It's completely Flash, not Pivot.
But otherwise, you're completely right.
This is hardly an RHG demo. An RHG demo should introduce and showcase your RHG character's abilities and powers. All I found out from your animation is that your RHG usually doesn't have arms, explodes randomly when running, magically reappears, teleports, and somehow generates lines in mid-air.
The first few steps of the run is kinda smooth though. Good job on that, though you need to work on the physics a little bit. It looks like he's just walking huge steps really quickly, instead of bouncing like how running should be.
Oh, and the smoke shouldn't change colour. Instead, when it dissipates, only the transparency should change.