http://www.filz.us/view/3a063e33-c27/


I've been working on this for a few days, and it was mostly just to get back into this, but I got quite into it and made some more. :) I don't know what should happen next, I was thinking maybe he kills a couple more, then fights a giant one or something. C&c appreciated, thanks. :)

Nice! Pretty sweet! I think all you need to work on is your wobbliness, and maybe trying to get a little bit of double framing (not completely necessary, maybe just my opinion.)

I know it's tough if you're using a mouse and all, but just try to line those union skins up, and a little double framing might also help. Besides that, it's great, and I love the style! Keep it up.

Thanks, I've finished it now, here's the link. http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/623939