Gentlemen, I have two drawings for you today, both fairly recent.

Kazami Yuuka

http://i.imgur.com/oucDZJi.jpg

Hinanawi Tenshi

http://i.imgur.com/M6YtsrN.jpg?2

As usual, cnc is appreciated. I might not reply, but I certainly do read comments and keep them in mind.

Dude, your art reminds me a whole lot of Xero's
But that's kinda besides the point.
There are a few things here that don't sit right with me, the biggest issue being the way you do clothing(much like how xero does it)
Your folds and flaps and overall clothing physics are just not done right, and that's the biggest thing that needs addressing.
The only other thing that really irks me about these is the second one's left hand(her left) and how all the other fingers just don't exist.
I know they're meant to all be in one straight line behind the index finger, but it just looks unnatural and odd without them showing even a little.
overall good job though bro, keep it up