Created out of boredom really. I guess it shows pretty much what my skill level is.
What do you think?
http://filz.us/VM1
Small Scrap
Started by: power fuse0 | Replies: 16 | Views: 1,097
Sep 7, 2013 3:05 PM #1080845
Sep 7, 2013 3:09 PM #1080847
Looks decent!
Now i'm stating the bad things i reviewed.
The blur at the dodge thingy seems bad.
There's no arm at the beginning btw.
That rapid kick is normal but the way you did looks weird.
Now i'm stating the bad things i reviewed.
The blur at the dodge thingy seems bad.
There's no arm at the beginning btw.
That rapid kick is normal but the way you did looks weird.
Sep 7, 2013 3:11 PM #1080848
Quote from HitsuLooks decent!
Now i'm stating the bad things i reviewed.
The blur at the dodge thingy seems bad.
There's no arm at the beginning btw.
That rapid kick is normal but the way you did looks weird.
Thanks for the input, I agree with you on the dodge thing, I got lazy there I guess.
I know there's no arms at the start xD (lazy again lol)
How do you mean the rapid kick looks weird?
Sep 7, 2013 4:09 PM #1080863
I think its better to make the supporting leg straight together with the body while doing the rapid kick.. Because the way you do it doesn't look balance to me lol..
Like this
And also try to not to make a long pause after every attacks... make the pause shorter so the movement will flow.. Other than that its cool. :D
Like this

And also try to not to make a long pause after every attacks... make the pause shorter so the movement will flow.. Other than that its cool. :D
Sep 7, 2013 4:12 PM #1080865
Quote from Clifford60I think its better to make the supporting leg straight together with the body while doing the rapid kick.. Because the way you do it doesn't look balance to me lol..
Like this http://www.filz.us/files/5222b595/0c6/Kick.png
And also try to not to make a long pause after every attacks... make the pause shorter so the movement will flow.. Other than that its cool. :D
Ah that makes sense to me, I can see where you're coming from. During the kick he is travelling in a forward motion, but you're right, it's not naturally balanced.
thanks :)
Sep 7, 2013 6:09 PM #1080900
I actually really like the style. :) But the blur when he dodges (?) is kinda weird. Otherwise it's nice, I'd like to see a full length stick fight from you. :D
Sep 8, 2013 12:30 AM #1080956
Quote from power fuse0How do you mean the rapid kick looks weird?
I mean the 3 rapid kicks looks just highlighted,also the hit effects needs work :D.
Sep 8, 2013 10:17 AM #1081154
Its the motherfucking Pf0, Sup man. Where have you been these days?
Sep 8, 2013 11:11 AM #1081170
Quote from poppetje3DIts the motherfucking Pf0, Sup man. Where have you been these days?
nice to see someone familiar ^_^, I see you've come far.
hi :3, I have been doing stuff xD. University, work, moving in with the GF. Lost touch with animation really, how've you been :)
Sep 8, 2013 11:56 AM #1081185
Quote from power fuse0nice to see someone familiar ^_^, I see you've come far.
hi :3, I have been doing stuff xD. University, work, moving in with the GF. Lost touch with animation really, how've you been :)
Im doing fine, I stept away from pivot and go into flash. Still animating these days and it started to be my passion. So are you gonna keep on animating or will you drop something down now and then?
Sep 8, 2013 12:11 PM #1081190
Quote from poppetje3DIm doing fine, I stept away from pivot and go into flash. Still animating these days and it started to be my passion. So are you gonna keep on animating or will you drop something down now and then?
i'll hang around for the time being, I enjoyed making the animation above, doesnt take too long either :). Maybe I'll do one of those RHG things.
Sep 8, 2013 12:16 PM #1081192
Holy shit the lord and master. Sounds like things are going well for you :D
Sep 8, 2013 12:49 PM #1081204
Quote from Arch-AngelHoly shit the lord and master. Sounds like things are going well for you :D
Holy moly, you've come far as well :O. Look at you with your purple name xD. How've you been :D
Sep 8, 2013 12:53 PM #1081206
It has been well! And then it got bad for a while and now it's excellent again!
I wouldn't say I've come far animation wise, but I've been practicing a bit with the drawing and stufffff.
I wouldn't say I've come far animation wise, but I've been practicing a bit with the drawing and stufffff.
Sep 8, 2013 12:56 PM #1081207
Quote from Arch-AngelIt has been well! And then it got bad for a while and now it's excellent again!
I wouldn't say I've come far animation wise, but I've been practicing a bit with the drawing and stufffff.
glad to hear you're ok now at least :). I really should update my internet profile, most of my viewable work is 3 years out of date lmao. Currently working on my own site though, so I guess once that's done I'll see what I can do about updating things like profiles. Lol.
What's the story on double posting these days, I noticed this site isn't nearly as busy as it used to be, should I whack all my animations into one thread?